for The Loric Games4/14/2015 c2 Loricforlife
I like your story a lot! I just feel like it is the hunger games story, and you just changed the names though:( but keep writing!
I like your story a lot! I just feel like it is the hunger games story, and you just changed the names though:( but keep writing!
10/27/2014 c12 Guest
I like it
I like it
4/26/2014 c12 Dkogan19
Love it! Keep typing. Btw play clash of clans
Love it! Keep typing. Btw play clash of clans
4/24/2014 c1 brony
I think this is a brilient ideas combining 2 grate books to make an even better one!
I think this is a brilient ideas combining 2 grate books to make an even better one!
3/28/2014 c12 
5captain.fang
Finally the games! (Sorry, I only just caught up now) It's a really interesting idea that the legacy use is controlled by pain. I think it makes for a much fairer competition which is good for the Cepans (although I want my favourite garde to win of course). But still, it's an amazing original idea! There was a lot of careless romance going on in that first chapter that distracted them from the fact that it was a death match. But now that there has been more action, I hope they stay vigilant and ready for a fight! I can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out with the career pack :D
5captain.fangFinally the games! (Sorry, I only just caught up now) It's a really interesting idea that the legacy use is controlled by pain. I think it makes for a much fairer competition which is good for the Cepans (although I want my favourite garde to win of course). But still, it's an amazing original idea! There was a lot of careless romance going on in that first chapter that distracted them from the fact that it was a death match. But now that there has been more action, I hope they stay vigilant and ready for a fight! I can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out with the career pack :D
3/18/2014 c12 Little Book Owl
Please write more! This is a perfect mashup of my two most favorite books! Great writing!
Please write more! This is a perfect mashup of my two most favorite books! Great writing!
3/8/2014 c12 3scone104
"Bitch cut my hair" AHAHA that had me laughing hard :)
Great chapter, quick update ;) And I love the action, though Marina exerted herself waaay too much. She better not die! Please don't kill her!
Update soon XD
3scone104"Bitch cut my hair" AHAHA that had me laughing hard :)
Great chapter, quick update ;) And I love the action, though Marina exerted herself waaay too much. She better not die! Please don't kill her!
Update soon XD
3/7/2014 c11 EpicLoric24
Who are those voices? Really curious XD
Oh so flirty. Fluffiness! I think there's more lovey-dovey stuff than the fight itself. more cheesy than John and Sarah Haha Navrina deeply in love :)
LOVELY chapter. It's really great.
Update soon. Please I mean really soon. i'm looking forward to this story since there are only few crossovers and few LL fandom updates. hehe
Who are those voices? Really curious XD
Oh so flirty. Fluffiness! I think there's more lovey-dovey stuff than the fight itself. more cheesy than John and Sarah Haha Navrina deeply in love :)
LOVELY chapter. It's really great.
Update soon. Please I mean really soon. i'm looking forward to this story since there are only few crossovers and few LL fandom updates. hehe