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12/27/2016 c1 18maripaz6
Really neat! I felt like I was watching this happen to Chihiro as she lived it. I was rather confused at the beginning, though, because I thought she was older. But I caught on at the end, when it was her eleventh birthday.

One question- how does remembering cause her to get weirdly sick? Or is that explained in one of your later stories?

Also, it's a little weird to call Chihiro's mum 'the lady'. Totally my opinion, but I thought I'd bring it up. And maybe a little more characterization for the doctor? Unless, of course, you were trying to make him faceless.

Nice oneshot, though. Good job! :)
8/2/2014 c1 1Rebellion-10
Nice story.
2/26/2014 c1 9Nymraif
I love the part she remembered. Its so touching
1/28/2014 c1 2NekoNemui
Oooh, the prologue to Return to the Spirit Realm (: Loved it, Lana! xxxxx
12/11/2013 c1 5almost raining
I love the way you expanded on our prior views on Chihiro's parents characters, as well as her own. Great ideas. :)
12/9/2013 c1 AlyonaKK1
Wonderful story ! Very interesting details of feelings and thoughts and evens, of course. Keep on, dear writer! Will be waiting for the next part!

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