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1/1/2015 c1 7twlightbella
Love that song and aww
8/5/2014 c1 fun-flower
There are some very notable mistakes, you need to work on your speech and also, study hard grammar. Commas and spelling are your weaknesses, work on that! Don't get me wrong, it's an very nice one shot and I liked, honestly one of the best Auslly wedding fics, only your grammar is not one of the bests. I still like it. Hope you write more :)
7/6/2014 c1 Guest
I love it!:)
6/20/2014 c1 aesthetic umbrella
Nice story. You can tell that English isn't your first language, because their are a few spelling errors and all. But it was really good for your Fanfiction. 'mine and Austin's wedding day' is incorrect grammatically. You might want to watch out for comma errors.
6/10/2014 c1 18austlly394
I really liked how you made everyone be born on the same day. Loved it
5/25/2014 c2 Guest
Basically everything from skwirelygurli I love. 100 one shots.
5/4/2014 c2 guest
both both both both both both both both both both
5/4/2014 c2 Guest
I think u should do the call that turned my life upside down
5/4/2014 c2 16SkinnyJeansNLattes
The call that turned my life upside down! But Ally should live in that story otherwise my heart would break... But the wedding was adorable!

Keep writing, keep shining and keep trying
Xx
5/4/2014 c2 Lorelei01
The second one,I love that idea!
12/15/2013 c1 la trita
wow it so sweet, i love it :)
12/11/2013 c1 83LoveShipper
Happy Wedding day to Mr and Mrs Austin and Ally Moon
12/10/2013 c1 Steph
So cute! And amazing for your first one!
12/10/2013 c1 Jojo
Great story for your first!
12/10/2013 c1 14pancakeLOVER2245
i love it! It was amazing 3

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