for My Wedding Day!8/5/2014 c1 fun-flower
There are some very notable mistakes, you need to work on your speech and also, study hard grammar. Commas and spelling are your weaknesses, work on that! Don't get me wrong, it's an very nice one shot and I liked, honestly one of the best Auslly wedding fics, only your grammar is not one of the bests. I still like it. Hope you write more :)
There are some very notable mistakes, you need to work on your speech and also, study hard grammar. Commas and spelling are your weaknesses, work on that! Don't get me wrong, it's an very nice one shot and I liked, honestly one of the best Auslly wedding fics, only your grammar is not one of the bests. I still like it. Hope you write more :)
7/6/2014 c1 Guest
I love it!:)
I love it!:)
6/20/2014 c1 aesthetic umbrella
Nice story. You can tell that English isn't your first language, because their are a few spelling errors and all. But it was really good for your Fanfiction. 'mine and Austin's wedding day' is incorrect grammatically. You might want to watch out for comma errors.
Nice story. You can tell that English isn't your first language, because their are a few spelling errors and all. But it was really good for your Fanfiction. 'mine and Austin's wedding day' is incorrect grammatically. You might want to watch out for comma errors.
5/25/2014 c2 Guest
Basically everything from skwirelygurli I love. 100 one shots.
Basically everything from skwirelygurli I love. 100 one shots.
5/4/2014 c2 guest
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5/4/2014 c2 Guest
I think u should do the call that turned my life upside down
I think u should do the call that turned my life upside down
5/4/2014 c2 
16SkinnyJeansNLattes
The call that turned my life upside down! But Ally should live in that story otherwise my heart would break... But the wedding was adorable!
Keep writing, keep shining and keep trying
Xx
16SkinnyJeansNLattesThe call that turned my life upside down! But Ally should live in that story otherwise my heart would break... But the wedding was adorable!
Keep writing, keep shining and keep trying
Xx
12/15/2013 c1 la trita
wow it so sweet, i love it :)
wow it so sweet, i love it :)
12/10/2013 c1 Steph
So cute! And amazing for your first one!
So cute! And amazing for your first one!
12/10/2013 c1 Jojo
Great story for your first!
Great story for your first!