
6/10/2015 c39
14Wolfrunner99-2
I was getting ready to laugh, Cat... You tricked me. I thought it was gonna be funny. I should not be grinning like a madman, nope. I should not. But, I am... does that make me crazy? Because I really enjoyed this chapter.

I was getting ready to laugh, Cat... You tricked me. I thought it was gonna be funny. I should not be grinning like a madman, nope. I should not. But, I am... does that make me crazy? Because I really enjoyed this chapter.
5/14/2015 c28
7sarafine-ecleips
"Seeds from my garden?"
That... Does not sound like it probably should sound.

"Seeds from my garden?"
That... Does not sound like it probably should sound.
4/25/2015 c14
5Ur fan
I thaught Jack was 15 too. Not just his size but because he looks like he is in the middle of a growth spurt. It makes sence for him to be a kid forever to. I mean that would fit his character. Maybe because he reminds me a bit of Peter Pan. Any way, Jacks parents should have told him about their plans before.

I thaught Jack was 15 too. Not just his size but because he looks like he is in the middle of a growth spurt. It makes sence for him to be a kid forever to. I mean that would fit his character. Maybe because he reminds me a bit of Peter Pan. Any way, Jacks parents should have told him about their plans before.
4/25/2015 c2 Ur fan
HAHA, I didn't know you could chuckle with an accent. Love this so far. Jack is adorable
HAHA, I didn't know you could chuckle with an accent. Love this so far. Jack is adorable
3/2/2015 c36
7BrightSideoftheMoon
Haha I just cannot get over how badass Jack is in this story. And evil. He's an evil badass and I love it! Great job and I will be awaiting the next chapter!

Haha I just cannot get over how badass Jack is in this story. And evil. He's an evil badass and I love it! Great job and I will be awaiting the next chapter!
2/18/2015 c36
14Wolfrunner99-2
Just read this really quickly, and am reviewing this really quickly, but this is really good, only caught a few mistakes in it! Keep up the good work!

Just read this really quickly, and am reviewing this really quickly, but this is really good, only caught a few mistakes in it! Keep up the good work!
12/11/2014 c34 Wolfrunner99-2
Asher, you ASSHOLE! You KNEW what was going to happen! Cat, this is... very very well written. But poor Jack! Keep writing. Ignore any flames you get for this chapter.
Asher, you ASSHOLE! You KNEW what was going to happen! Cat, this is... very very well written. But poor Jack! Keep writing. Ignore any flames you get for this chapter.
12/11/2014 c34
3Caithlinn13
wow.. I totally, seriously, didn't expect that.. O_o
what about a chapter with Jack and little snow animals that like him? Or a chapter which Jack and the wind?

wow.. I totally, seriously, didn't expect that.. O_o
what about a chapter with Jack and little snow animals that like him? Or a chapter which Jack and the wind?
11/13/2014 c32 Guest
please please update please
please please update please
11/11/2014 c25 WEast
That was great. Such a good memory. I like how we are seeing lots of little things about Jack, like the fear of spiders and the pollen allergy. It's also funny!
That was great. Such a good memory. I like how we are seeing lots of little things about Jack, like the fear of spiders and the pollen allergy. It's also funny!