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3/22/2022 c15 5tbeans3
Loved this chapter. Can't wait for another!
3/16/2022 c15 Babyface Carter
New reader to your story. I don’t pay too much attention after I read title of a story, it’s author and the abstract so I actually had no idea until this chapter that this story began posting in 2013! I’m so glad I found it because I do love a good daddyward/olderward story. And kiddos to you for plugging away and posting chapters when you can. While I hope they come sooner rather than later, me and others will be waiting.

Thanks for writing and sharing your story with us!
3/13/2022 c15 saintfudge
Yes…I’m happy f9r an update ..been in my alerts since 2015 ..see you in a few chapters oasnce the grooves back ..have fun
3/10/2022 c15 Nana
I'm loving it but dreading the moment Bella discovers Edward's "bad side" because I think she will either panic or leave. Hope she doesn't break poor little Tony's heart.

All in all, great story and waiting to read more.
Thanks.
3/6/2022 c15 Patriciadiane
So what is the story about Edward? He certainly seems to be yearning for a normal life - whatever that means.
3/5/2022 c14 Patriciadiane
Mike is truly an idiot. He makes Edward look 100% an improvement.
3/5/2022 c13 Patriciadiane
What is up with Charlie having a heart? What is his problem?
I love Lil Man - he is so smart.
3/5/2022 c12 Patriciadiane
Actually surprised that Bella left Lil Man downstairs and that Edward just left him there. Never liked Mike. Still don't glad-handing to get votes and not above using Bella. What is Edward's agenda?

Dropped call
3/5/2022 c11 Patriciadiane
Why is Charlie such an ass?
3/5/2022 c10 Patriciadiane
Bella needs a swift kick in the pants. Mike needs to disappear. Edward needs to ride up in a carriage or something to get her out of this hell.
3/5/2022 c9 Patriciadiane
Interesting questions and I guess we shall see.
3/5/2022 c8 Patriciadiane
Quite convincing is our Edward.
3/5/2022 c7 Patriciadiane
Interesting fun night followed by the horrific fear
Edward's name such power
3/5/2022 c6 Patriciadiane
Love the 365-day analogy.
3/5/2022 c5 Patriciadiane
Alice is going to regret her treatment of Bella, maybe?
Tony was so scared and his heart was breaking.
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