for Under Your Wing12/15/2013 c2 
12thecoldforest
Kyaa, I know I shouldn't ask, but more please! This is painful and adorable at the same time!
12thecoldforestKyaa, I know I shouldn't ask, but more please! This is painful and adorable at the same time!
12/14/2013 c1 Another observer of the world
Wow this story is soo cool and interesting !
You should make a multi chapter story with this. It would be such a waste not to make this into something much more.!
I like the idea, the writhing and Kuro with wings is soooooooo cute I still don't know what colour they are. ( still if we think right it should be like his eyes/hair )
Anyway please make from this a long story that will have a happy ending (I hope)
With Kaga Kuro will have his wish fulfilled maybe.
Good Luck !
Wow this story is soo cool and interesting !
You should make a multi chapter story with this. It would be such a waste not to make this into something much more.!
I like the idea, the writhing and Kuro with wings is soooooooo cute I still don't know what colour they are. ( still if we think right it should be like his eyes/hair )
Anyway please make from this a long story that will have a happy ending (I hope)
With Kaga Kuro will have his wish fulfilled maybe.
Good Luck !
12/13/2013 c1 Guest
NOOOO SO DAMN ANGSTY ;; A ;; you have to write a sequel of this sometime!
A happy ending for AoKuro perhaps...too much angst in this fandom I need some air to breathe LOL.
Anyway, this is really nice despite it being short and angsty. Thanks for writing it, I really hope you'll make a sequel with a happy ending though!
NOOOO SO DAMN ANGSTY ;; A ;; you have to write a sequel of this sometime!
A happy ending for AoKuro perhaps...too much angst in this fandom I need some air to breathe LOL.
Anyway, this is really nice despite it being short and angsty. Thanks for writing it, I really hope you'll make a sequel with a happy ending though!