for RvB: Mind Games9/9/2015 c8 
11Michael Storm
Hey. I just found this, and I am soooo sad to see that it hasn't been updated in a while. Were you going to finish it? If yes, then PLEASE DO! This story is amazing!
11Michael StormHey. I just found this, and I am soooo sad to see that it hasn't been updated in a while. Were you going to finish it? If yes, then PLEASE DO! This story is amazing!
1/10/2015 c8 2rvbmastermind
Nice job I had to stop laughing a few times because it got so funny I have watch most of rvb so I know mostbof the things that happen but reading it just makes it a hell of a lot funnier
2rvbmastermindNice job I had to stop laughing a few times because it got so funny I have watch most of rvb so I know mostbof the things that happen but reading it just makes it a hell of a lot funnier
9/20/2014 c8 2Fangthehedgewolf
There are very few stories where someone from our world ends up in the RvB universe. I like this story so far, great narration, description of detail and the personalities fit perfectly! Keep it up!
2FangthehedgewolfThere are very few stories where someone from our world ends up in the RvB universe. I like this story so far, great narration, description of detail and the personalities fit perfectly! Keep it up!
6/29/2014 c8 5635312
Hahaha! I love the story! Its so funny and true! XD Keep up the awesome work and I cant wait for the next chapter!
Hahaha! I love the story! Its so funny and true! XD Keep up the awesome work and I cant wait for the next chapter!
5/3/2014 c6 Benthino
Agent Oregon, it's a true pleasure meeting you. I do hope your little adventure turns out splendid, but don't fight Maine. Seriously, he will eat your head.
Agent Oregon, it's a true pleasure meeting you. I do hope your little adventure turns out splendid, but don't fight Maine. Seriously, he will eat your head.
4/15/2014 c8 7DaLintyMan
Now, what are the odds that something "averse" will have happened, and the "robots" will be armed with live ammunition?
*whistles innocently*
Still, this could use a Beta Reader.
7DaLintyManNow, what are the odds that something "averse" will have happened, and the "robots" will be armed with live ammunition?
*whistles innocently*
Still, this could use a Beta Reader.
4/15/2014 c7 DaLintyMan
So, you get the AI of snark and helpful instructions? That's... pretty good, all things considered.
So, you get the AI of snark and helpful instructions? That's... pretty good, all things considered.
12/22/2013 c6 Anonymous fanz
I think the plasma blades originated from the aliens tech. It sounds reasonable with the fact that they made the energy sword and other plasma weapons. The aliens were enemies of the UNSC(I think during when the original Alison was in the UNSC).
I think the plasma blades originated from the aliens tech. It sounds reasonable with the fact that they made the energy sword and other plasma weapons. The aliens were enemies of the UNSC(I think during when the original Alison was in the UNSC).
12/21/2013 c6 Fremde Is Not Taken okay
Hey mate just one thing , ze ... Aren't you making Oregon a little too OP ? I mean come ON ... too much OP
Hey mate just one thing , ze ... Aren't you making Oregon a little too OP ? I mean come ON ... too much OP
12/16/2013 c4 12Jaden Silver
Yes! The Tex fight! I've already got the song in my head just thinking about it. I'm looking forward to seeing Oregon's knowledge of what happens will change things. One tiny tip, though. I don't know if you have a plan for why Oregon is so good with some of these weapons, even though he's never fought before, but you might want to give some kind of explanation. It's a little unbelievable. Also, maybe mention that he did something athletic when he was in the real world, just to explain why he's handling things so well. I know if this was me, I'd be dead before the first round! I'd like to see of there's a reason he's so good even though he has no training.
12Jaden SilverYes! The Tex fight! I've already got the song in my head just thinking about it. I'm looking forward to seeing Oregon's knowledge of what happens will change things. One tiny tip, though. I don't know if you have a plan for why Oregon is so good with some of these weapons, even though he's never fought before, but you might want to give some kind of explanation. It's a little unbelievable. Also, maybe mention that he did something athletic when he was in the real world, just to explain why he's handling things so well. I know if this was me, I'd be dead before the first round! I'd like to see of there's a reason he's so good even though he has no training.