for PS If this is Ziva8/1/2019 c8 Guest
This chapter you refer to a "twin bed" , yet chapter one says tony's new "king size bed"
Enjoyable story though
This chapter you refer to a "twin bed" , yet chapter one says tony's new "king size bed"
Enjoyable story though
5/18/2016 c11 
4SlashyMcGee
I sure hope that you plan on updating this sometime soon. I absolutely loved it so far.
4SlashyMcGeeI sure hope that you plan on updating this sometime soon. I absolutely loved it so far.
5/26/2014 c11 16beatrix.acs
OK, my Mossad theory is buried, maybe I watch too much TV shows... :D I have never suspected it might be him! Good idea with this, to bring out some old enemy! Very smart. As for the chapter - wonderful one, those two are so happy in love that my heart sings with joy! Thanks for it and can't wait for the other ones. :) And by the way - hope your granddaughter is fine already, it seems that it's still returning to her. Damn ear infections and poor little baby...
16beatrix.acsOK, my Mossad theory is buried, maybe I watch too much TV shows... :D I have never suspected it might be him! Good idea with this, to bring out some old enemy! Very smart. As for the chapter - wonderful one, those two are so happy in love that my heart sings with joy! Thanks for it and can't wait for the other ones. :) And by the way - hope your granddaughter is fine already, it seems that it's still returning to her. Damn ear infections and poor little baby...
5/25/2014 c11 Athenalarissa
I thought only one was the man who wanted to destroy TIVA completely... And this man was Ray... I must say that I'am a little disappointed that it isn't Ray... It would havbeen more interesting,but hey this your story...
I can't wait for the next update..
I thought only one was the man who wanted to destroy TIVA completely... And this man was Ray... I must say that I'am a little disappointed that it isn't Ray... It would havbeen more interesting,but hey this your story...
I can't wait for the next update..
5/25/2014 c11 17DS2010
great engagement, I love the ring.
damn chipper is out to cause trouble. maybe tony and ziva will shoot him
17DS2010great engagement, I love the ring.
damn chipper is out to cause trouble. maybe tony and ziva will shoot him
5/25/2014 c11 6AgentLunaA
Oh my! Why this crazy dude!
He's going after Abby too!
Are you trying to kill me or what? :)
Well, hope your baby be OK!
And welcome back!
6AgentLunaAOh my! Why this crazy dude!
He's going after Abby too!
Are you trying to kill me or what? :)
Well, hope your baby be OK!
And welcome back!
4/25/2014 c10 16emeralddragonjewel
can't wait to read more and see what happens next with our favorite couple
16emeralddragonjewelcan't wait to read more and see what happens next with our favorite couple
4/25/2014 c10 Sue Dooley
That is my favorite song when sung by Elvis. Another great chapter and loved the first date especially the proposal. Beautiful! The cliffhanger was a great touch. All I can say is thank you and keep writing. Fantastic!
That is my favorite song when sung by Elvis. Another great chapter and loved the first date especially the proposal. Beautiful! The cliffhanger was a great touch. All I can say is thank you and keep writing. Fantastic!
4/23/2014 c10 J09tiva
Who's this antagonist? I thought all of them who were hunting for ziva before were dead?
Do update soon
Who's this antagonist? I thought all of them who were hunting for ziva before were dead?
Do update soon