for Thunderous Music4/18/2014 c2 Guest
Great chapter, even though I prefer harem or Rias stories, Akeno is a close second.
Great chapter, even though I prefer harem or Rias stories, Akeno is a close second.
4/18/2014 c1 Guest
good start
good start
4/17/2014 c8 
1MisterAngelo'0
This looks great, the story is very enjoyable.
Naruto as an exorcist, as well as a to-be-angel is very interesting.
It felt like Naruto is going to replace Michael's Joker in the DxD world. I don't mind that.
But a warning message before the intercourse would have been nice though.
Also any chance you can make Naruto's sword have the ability to extend and shorten the size of the blade? Naruto wielding around a big-ass sword just feels wrong to me, a dagger-size one seems more fitting.
I look forward to your next update.
I just hope you don't include too many character from the Naruto anime. I believe that the cast of characters is big enough. More than 5, and I feel that it would get too crazy to manage.
1MisterAngelo'0This looks great, the story is very enjoyable.
Naruto as an exorcist, as well as a to-be-angel is very interesting.
It felt like Naruto is going to replace Michael's Joker in the DxD world. I don't mind that.
But a warning message before the intercourse would have been nice though.
Also any chance you can make Naruto's sword have the ability to extend and shorten the size of the blade? Naruto wielding around a big-ass sword just feels wrong to me, a dagger-size one seems more fitting.
I look forward to your next update.
I just hope you don't include too many character from the Naruto anime. I believe that the cast of characters is big enough. More than 5, and I feel that it would get too crazy to manage.
4/15/2014 c8 UltimateAlcatraz
Hey, man. Great story and i love the originality with Naruto being an exorcist instead of devil or fallen angel or dragonoid.
Been waiting for an update for a while now... Hope you haven't out this story on hiatus.
Please update soon.
Hey, man. Great story and i love the originality with Naruto being an exorcist instead of devil or fallen angel or dragonoid.
Been waiting for an update for a while now... Hope you haven't out this story on hiatus.
Please update soon.
4/7/2014 c8 Siriusly Grim
Well, well... this is quite a good story. I look forward to seeing more of it.
Well, well... this is quite a good story. I look forward to seeing more of it.
4/4/2014 c8 riass
Nice
Nice
4/3/2014 c8 Shikato Fizan
I just found this story. And i can guess what Naruto's sacred gear is. Is it [Zenith Tempest], the second strongest longinus? Because the only sacred which can control weather and element is Zenith Tempest.
I just found this story. And i can guess what Naruto's sacred gear is. Is it [Zenith Tempest], the second strongest longinus? Because the only sacred which can control weather and element is Zenith Tempest.
3/30/2014 c8 Guest
Please please update soon love the story
Please please update soon love the story
3/17/2014 c8 packjack
I like the story so far. Will there be any other Naruto characters appearing? And the only thing I didn't like was when the angels talked about caring about their own. Asia is probably the prime example of them not really taking care of their followers, but the thing that caught my attention was the situation with Xenovia. Someone that has been a devout follower is almost declared a heretic because she was on a mission for the Church and learned something that she wasn't looking to learn. The only reason she doesn't end up being expelled from the organization she has devoted her whole life to is that she knows a few higher ups. How many people end up being not just kicked out, but declared a heretic because they learn something that they may not have wanted to learn and didn't have the right connections to help them? For an organization that is supposed to treat everyone equally and with love, the Church clearly has some harsh rules that are sometimes ignored in the name of nepotism.
I'm not that familiar with the series so I don't know if anyone actually calls them out on anything, but I just wanted to give my opinion.
I like the story so far. Will there be any other Naruto characters appearing? And the only thing I didn't like was when the angels talked about caring about their own. Asia is probably the prime example of them not really taking care of their followers, but the thing that caught my attention was the situation with Xenovia. Someone that has been a devout follower is almost declared a heretic because she was on a mission for the Church and learned something that she wasn't looking to learn. The only reason she doesn't end up being expelled from the organization she has devoted her whole life to is that she knows a few higher ups. How many people end up being not just kicked out, but declared a heretic because they learn something that they may not have wanted to learn and didn't have the right connections to help them? For an organization that is supposed to treat everyone equally and with love, the Church clearly has some harsh rules that are sometimes ignored in the name of nepotism.
I'm not that familiar with the series so I don't know if anyone actually calls them out on anything, but I just wanted to give my opinion.
3/12/2014 c8 Fox
Next
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3/8/2014 c1 1The Eternal Forgotten
The beginning makes me think of the song Bloom, by The Paper Kites
1The Eternal ForgottenThe beginning makes me think of the song Bloom, by The Paper Kites
3/4/2014 c7 Apocalyptica-sama
I know they love(probably) each other...but It feels like Akeno has some sort of ulterior motive(Like making him "fall" to her)...or is it that I just don't how strongly a Devil's desire is?
I know they love(probably) each other...but It feels like Akeno has some sort of ulterior motive(Like making him "fall" to her)...or is it that I just don't how strongly a Devil's desire is?