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3Markus-Antonius
Gabriel was fun to read, I wonder how you'll portray her in The Second Son of God?
3Markus-AntoniusGabriel was fun to read, I wonder how you'll portray her in The Second Son of God?
1/9/2014 c7 hugp1x
It's nice to see an anime-based fic where the the protagonist and his love interest don't dance around the issue of each other when their feelings are so obvious.
The usual is such a tired trope that it gets irritating, this is much more 'realistic'.
It's nice to see an anime-based fic where the the protagonist and his love interest don't dance around the issue of each other when their feelings are so obvious.
The usual is such a tired trope that it gets irritating, this is much more 'realistic'.
1/9/2014 c7 Jose19
I am rather shocked at this chapter because if Naruto is going to do this with Akeno is has to be done before he reincarnates into a Angel because then he is forbidden to have any relationships with Akeno but the problem is will Naruto accept to be reincarnated to a Angel, and lose AKeno forever because so far there is no way to have sexual relationships without turning into a Fallen Angel because Naruto has his work cut out for him because this relationship will be very difficult for both of them.
I am rather shocked at this chapter because if Naruto is going to do this with Akeno is has to be done before he reincarnates into a Angel because then he is forbidden to have any relationships with Akeno but the problem is will Naruto accept to be reincarnated to a Angel, and lose AKeno forever because so far there is no way to have sexual relationships without turning into a Fallen Angel because Naruto has his work cut out for him because this relationship will be very difficult for both of them.
1/8/2014 c7 2Wrandral
I wonder how you'll handle the issues that will spring for this ... i mean Akeno want Naruto for herself as a devil but Gabriel wants to turn him into an angel and even if she manage to do it Akeno will make him fall faster than he can say ramen.
2WrandralI wonder how you'll handle the issues that will spring for this ... i mean Akeno want Naruto for herself as a devil but Gabriel wants to turn him into an angel and even if she manage to do it Akeno will make him fall faster than he can say ramen.
1/8/2014 c7 Guest
Excellent chapter well done and well written.
Excellent chapter well done and well written.
1/8/2014 c7 DarkPirateKing69
ooh, is it the freeze lightning from Stargate? awesome stuff :D i knew you wouldn't disappoint.. now if you could only keep him from becoming a Devil, this would be perfect. truly an excellent mix of unique ideas. at least i've never ANYONE in ANY fic use freeze lightning (if i was correct about it that is).
ooh, is it the freeze lightning from Stargate? awesome stuff :D i knew you wouldn't disappoint.. now if you could only keep him from becoming a Devil, this would be perfect. truly an excellent mix of unique ideas. at least i've never ANYONE in ANY fic use freeze lightning (if i was correct about it that is).
1/8/2014 c7 Darth Xion
Nicely done, thanks for updating..
I hope Naruto remains on the side of Heaven as it adds to the intrigue of the fic..
Cheers!
D-X
Nicely done, thanks for updating..
I hope Naruto remains on the side of Heaven as it adds to the intrigue of the fic..
Cheers!
D-X
1/8/2014 c7 1EienNoSetsuna
Yep, it definitely has to be THAT Sacred Gear since only THAT has the power to call both Lightning and Ice. Anyway, good job and keep up the good work. Hope you keep Naruto as an Exorcist or turn him into an Angel since we have TOO many Naruto and High school DxD crossovers involving Naruto becoming a Devil.
1EienNoSetsunaYep, it definitely has to be THAT Sacred Gear since only THAT has the power to call both Lightning and Ice. Anyway, good job and keep up the good work. Hope you keep Naruto as an Exorcist or turn him into an Angel since we have TOO many Naruto and High school DxD crossovers involving Naruto becoming a Devil.
1/7/2014 c6 Randomonymous
Nice Very nice story so far! Keep up the good work!
Nice Very nice story so far! Keep up the good work!
1/7/2014 c6 5GomuGomuRasenganNoSage
Interesting! Very original with this story! I'm looking forward to how everything works out. Keep up the good work.
5GomuGomuRasenganNoSageInteresting! Very original with this story! I'm looking forward to how everything works out. Keep up the good work.
1/7/2014 c6 Doritoboy
Sometimes when I re-read this chapter, you can have Naruto manipulate Akeno to the point where she could betray Rias.
Or have Naruto blackmail Rias and Sona to do whatever he says or he will kill Akeno.
Something like that but that's just me. Now that I think about I should make a story myself maybe a crossover. Envolving Naruto or One piece maybe both. Hmhmhmhmhmhmm.
Sometimes when I re-read this chapter, you can have Naruto manipulate Akeno to the point where she could betray Rias.
Or have Naruto blackmail Rias and Sona to do whatever he says or he will kill Akeno.
Something like that but that's just me. Now that I think about I should make a story myself maybe a crossover. Envolving Naruto or One piece maybe both. Hmhmhmhmhmhmm.