for Thunderous Music12/20/2013 c3 Fateless Sage
I can't wait for the big reveal of Naruto's identity as Kiroi Senko, and also after reading people's ideas on what they think his Sacred Gear will be I have to get my idea out there because I'm sure I know what it is, though so I don't spoil it for people if I'm right I'm only going to use one word. Trumpet. If I'm right you should know what that means and I shouldn't have spoiled it for anyone.
I can't wait for the big reveal of Naruto's identity as Kiroi Senko, and also after reading people's ideas on what they think his Sacred Gear will be I have to get my idea out there because I'm sure I know what it is, though so I don't spoil it for people if I'm right I'm only going to use one word. Trumpet. If I'm right you should know what that means and I shouldn't have spoiled it for anyone.
12/20/2013 c3 
3Karlsson
I'm all giddy 3 Can't wait for next cchaper this story is pure awesomeness. I wonder how Akeno will react aswell. You seem to be enjoying writing this story and it makes me glad. Wspecially since Naruto wont be any highclass devil from the start. (That's what it looks like atm.)
Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming! Looking forward to next chapter. Good luck writing! :)
3KarlssonI'm all giddy 3 Can't wait for next cchaper this story is pure awesomeness. I wonder how Akeno will react aswell. You seem to be enjoying writing this story and it makes me glad. Wspecially since Naruto wont be any highclass devil from the start. (That's what it looks like atm.)
Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming! Looking forward to next chapter. Good luck writing! :)
12/20/2013 c3 5Orchamus
Can't wait for the fight between Naruto and Koakbiel, the shock the Devils are likely to emote should be priceless!
5OrchamusCan't wait for the fight between Naruto and Koakbiel, the shock the Devils are likely to emote should be priceless!
12/20/2013 c3 Darth Xion
Awesome..
Cant wait to read what kind of Sacred Gear Naruto has, & what forms of magic he knows..
Will Naruto turn into a devil? Cuz things are interesting with him being on the opposite side.. ;D
Eagerly awaiting ur next chapter..
Cheers!
D-X
Awesome..
Cant wait to read what kind of Sacred Gear Naruto has, & what forms of magic he knows..
Will Naruto turn into a devil? Cuz things are interesting with him being on the opposite side.. ;D
Eagerly awaiting ur next chapter..
Cheers!
D-X
12/20/2013 c3 2reven228
I'm oh so sorry you lost your head
A careless monster who wound up dead
You wore your sin like it was some kinda prize
Too many lies, too many lies
Great chapter, keep goin and stay golden
2reven228I'm oh so sorry you lost your head
A careless monster who wound up dead
You wore your sin like it was some kinda prize
Too many lies, too many lies
Great chapter, keep goin and stay golden
12/20/2013 c3 6The Faceless Wordsmith
Damn these endings always building anticipation! Looking forward to the next chapter.
6The Faceless WordsmithDamn these endings always building anticipation! Looking forward to the next chapter.
12/20/2013 c3 7Ezilo
please update soon i want to see naruto in action so badly now and also when are going to update second son of god i really want to see what happens during the fight.
7Eziloplease update soon i want to see naruto in action so badly now and also when are going to update second son of god i really want to see what happens during the fight.
12/20/2013 c3 Guest
Maybe after everyone finds out about god being dead, Naruto can join Rias' peerage? Seeing as he's getting tired of fighting. As always, looking forward to the next chapter.
Maybe after everyone finds out about god being dead, Naruto can join Rias' peerage? Seeing as he's getting tired of fighting. As always, looking forward to the next chapter.
12/20/2013 c3 1guisniperman
Yeah, chapter four promise to be heavy on revelation. Both Canon and story Wise.
1guisnipermanYeah, chapter four promise to be heavy on revelation. Both Canon and story Wise.
12/19/2013 c2 Lazy
One tip, you really need to fix the thing you do with adding ... after every sentence. It sounds mean when I say it, but bad writers use those instead of commas. Many of the sentences you have them on do not need them,and many others can have commas instead.
But beside that, your story was very good and well written. Sorry if I sounded like a jerk, its just that three dot thing really bothers me because everyone seems to do it.
One tip, you really need to fix the thing you do with adding ... after every sentence. It sounds mean when I say it, but bad writers use those instead of commas. Many of the sentences you have them on do not need them,and many others can have commas instead.
But beside that, your story was very good and well written. Sorry if I sounded like a jerk, its just that three dot thing really bothers me because everyone seems to do it.