for Thunderous Music1/31/2015 c1 Agent Frank
Great backstory! I don't really know how i feel about this being a monogamous relationship since it's DxD...but this story looks pretty good so far.
Great backstory! I don't really know how i feel about this being a monogamous relationship since it's DxD...but this story looks pretty good so far.
12/5/2014 c8 Guest
please update this story
please update this story
11/6/2014 c8 Biblio388
Nice to see the last few thoughts there. That seems like it could lead to some awkward situations in the future. Really like what you are doing with this story and hope to read more of it in the future.
Nice to see the last few thoughts there. That seems like it could lead to some awkward situations in the future. Really like what you are doing with this story and hope to read more of it in the future.
11/5/2014 c6 Biblio388
Quite happy to see Akeno acting the way she is and playing the main role in a romance. Most other stories I have read that have her in the harem make her out to be a temptress who likes to play with the main characters relationship with the other girls in the harem. It is nice to see her take the spotlight and I look forward to reading more.
Quite happy to see Akeno acting the way she is and playing the main role in a romance. Most other stories I have read that have her in the harem make her out to be a temptress who likes to play with the main characters relationship with the other girls in the harem. It is nice to see her take the spotlight and I look forward to reading more.
11/5/2014 c4 Biblio388
Have to agree that that ability is terrifying when correctly applied to a combat situation. I like how you had Azazel explain the difference between speed and instantaneous. It is one of the best descriptions I have seen for the ability.
Have to agree that that ability is terrifying when correctly applied to a combat situation. I like how you had Azazel explain the difference between speed and instantaneous. It is one of the best descriptions I have seen for the ability.
10/26/2014 c8 
10Ultimate Alcatraz
I love this story so much that I read it 15 times in the past I loved the other stories you got going like A Father's Love and The Iimmortal Son of the Earth.
But when will you update this story? I want to read what else you have in store.
10Ultimate AlcatrazI love this story so much that I read it 15 times in the past I loved the other stories you got going like A Father's Love and The Iimmortal Son of the Earth.
But when will you update this story? I want to read what else you have in store.
10/15/2014 c6 12Kolarthecool
Ugh, one short meeting as kids does not justify the relationship you're trying to force on us, if you can name someone you met as a 6yo and never memet again I'll eat my hat.
Also what happened to the music conductor theme, dropping it after the first chapter just makes it seem like a gimmick to make naruto look 'cool'.
Other than those two issues, good story. I hate naruto/hs dxd fics where naruto is super powerful but goes through pretty much the entire story without doing jack just so the author can preserve cannon.
12KolarthecoolUgh, one short meeting as kids does not justify the relationship you're trying to force on us, if you can name someone you met as a 6yo and never memet again I'll eat my hat.
Also what happened to the music conductor theme, dropping it after the first chapter just makes it seem like a gimmick to make naruto look 'cool'.
Other than those two issues, good story. I hate naruto/hs dxd fics where naruto is super powerful but goes through pretty much the entire story without doing jack just so the author can preserve cannon.
10/9/2014 c8 Qzh
Good story so far, cant wait to read what happens at the meeting with tensions running high between Naruto and Azazel.
Kinda surprised Koneko didnt smell Naruto's scent on Akeno although that would of been too cliche, maybe?
Good story so far, cant wait to read what happens at the meeting with tensions running high between Naruto and Azazel.
Kinda surprised Koneko didnt smell Naruto's scent on Akeno although that would of been too cliche, maybe?