for Two of a Kind8/28/2016 c1 
1Smurfette101
This is such a late review but I must say this was a very impressive fanfiction. You really captured Jack's small yearning for a companion, and Elsa's childish yet real fear for her powers. The dialogue is perfect and I can already feel a natural connection between them in your writing. I would really like for you to continue this, (again I know this review is late and you probably won't care to see this) so I wait hopefully (probably hopelessly) for an update.
1Smurfette101This is such a late review but I must say this was a very impressive fanfiction. You really captured Jack's small yearning for a companion, and Elsa's childish yet real fear for her powers. The dialogue is perfect and I can already feel a natural connection between them in your writing. I would really like for you to continue this, (again I know this review is late and you probably won't care to see this) so I wait hopefully (probably hopelessly) for an update.
1/15/2014 c1 JustAnotherHuman
Good story. I like brotherly Jack.
Good story. I like brotherly Jack.
1/11/2014 c1 3AffyRainbws
could you please make more it was sooo cute just to end there please thanks :)
3AffyRainbwscould you please make more it was sooo cute just to end there please thanks :)
12/17/2013 c1 Guest
I hope you turn this into a multi-chapter! I would love to read more! :)
I hope you turn this into a multi-chapter! I would love to read more! :)
12/17/2013 c1 5Miki Fubuki
That is just so adorably precious. .w. Come on...continue! you know you want toooo
5Miki FubukiThat is just so adorably precious. .w. Come on...continue! you know you want toooo
12/16/2013 c1 Lucerious
Hello! I enjoyed reading your story. I think Elsa and Jack getting to know each other due to their similarities and such makes for a good story. I look forward to seeing what some of your ideas are should you decide to continue this fic. If you do could you maybe have more cute moments between Jack and little Elsa? I like it when Jack interacts with children and when he acts like a big brother
Hello! I enjoyed reading your story. I think Elsa and Jack getting to know each other due to their similarities and such makes for a good story. I look forward to seeing what some of your ideas are should you decide to continue this fic. If you do could you maybe have more cute moments between Jack and little Elsa? I like it when Jack interacts with children and when he acts like a big brother