for Reality Café6/16/2014 c2 RoseQuartz1
Arella's birth name, I'm fairly sure, was Angelina. Or perhaps Angeline...
I'm very sure it's one of those.
Love the poem, btw. X)
Arella's birth name, I'm fairly sure, was Angelina. Or perhaps Angeline...
I'm very sure it's one of those.
Love the poem, btw. X)
5/1/2014 c21 
6TheFoolOnMelancholyHill
Aw, it's over?! Please don't tell me that it's over :( *sighs*
Never would've pictured Adeline referring to Slade as " ." And the fact that she blames herself for what happened to him is quite different from what authors on here usually write. I liked the line "He's just a victim in a bloody war," because it's true physically, mentally, and emotionally.
You have such a remarkable talent at writing poems and writing in general. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with viewers such as myself.
Keep on writing :)
"And in the end, the love you take, is equal to the love...you make." "End" by The Beatles
-TheFoolOnMelancholyHill
6TheFoolOnMelancholyHillAw, it's over?! Please don't tell me that it's over :( *sighs*
Never would've pictured Adeline referring to Slade as " ." And the fact that she blames herself for what happened to him is quite different from what authors on here usually write. I liked the line "He's just a victim in a bloody war," because it's true physically, mentally, and emotionally.
You have such a remarkable talent at writing poems and writing in general. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with viewers such as myself.
Keep on writing :)
"And in the end, the love you take, is equal to the love...you make." "End" by The Beatles
-TheFoolOnMelancholyHill
5/1/2014 c20 TheFoolOnMelancholyHill
I forgot to say this in my last review, but I also liked the poem about Kitten :)
Wow, nice chapter. No one really takes time to write about Mumbo's back-story. I've always felt that under all of his witty banter and jokes, there is something dark and psychopathic hidden deep within him. It only makes sense to add the cursed hat and wand. Also, did you know Mumbo is voiced by the same person who voices the character Ice King in the show Adventure Time? Kind of ironic now that I think about it, considering your approach to Mumbo's back-story. Both of them went crazy!
Aw, thanks for giving me a shout-out in your Author's Note! I appreciate it. And I'm not sure what my least favorite poem in the collection is, all of them are really great and something to be proud of.
I forgot to say this in my last review, but I also liked the poem about Kitten :)
Wow, nice chapter. No one really takes time to write about Mumbo's back-story. I've always felt that under all of his witty banter and jokes, there is something dark and psychopathic hidden deep within him. It only makes sense to add the cursed hat and wand. Also, did you know Mumbo is voiced by the same person who voices the character Ice King in the show Adventure Time? Kind of ironic now that I think about it, considering your approach to Mumbo's back-story. Both of them went crazy!
Aw, thanks for giving me a shout-out in your Author's Note! I appreciate it. And I'm not sure what my least favorite poem in the collection is, all of them are really great and something to be proud of.
5/1/2014 c19 TheFoolOnMelancholyHill
Excellent poem, as always :) Mother Mae-Eye was a pretty creepy villain, and I kind of like the fact that she acknowledges that the vigilantes known as the Teen Titans are still teenagers.
Well I for one would like to say that all of your poems are fantastic - but one in particular sticks out. I'm not much of a Terra fan so to say, I don't hate her and I don't like her, the feeling is mutual, but I really liked the poem you wrote about her. At the end, it's like Terra ran out of time and everything just spiraled out of control. You also left it on a very ominous note, which I enjoyed immensely.
Excellent poem, as always :) Mother Mae-Eye was a pretty creepy villain, and I kind of like the fact that she acknowledges that the vigilantes known as the Teen Titans are still teenagers.
Well I for one would like to say that all of your poems are fantastic - but one in particular sticks out. I'm not much of a Terra fan so to say, I don't hate her and I don't like her, the feeling is mutual, but I really liked the poem you wrote about her. At the end, it's like Terra ran out of time and everything just spiraled out of control. You also left it on a very ominous note, which I enjoyed immensely.
4/9/2014 c18 6TheFoolOnMelancholyHill
Hahaha! "Where there are cows? But here are no cows/And I depart. With the sweetest sorrow"
I'd like to apologize and say I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed in a while. I have read your previous chapters from when I last reviewed, it's just I usually read them during school and it doesn't allow me to sign in when on mobile.
Hm, I believe he called him Billy?
6TheFoolOnMelancholyHillHahaha! "Where there are cows? But here are no cows/And I depart. With the sweetest sorrow"
I'd like to apologize and say I'm sorry that I haven't reviewed in a while. I have read your previous chapters from when I last reviewed, it's just I usually read them during school and it doesn't allow me to sign in when on mobile.
Hm, I believe he called him Billy?
4/2/2014 c17 13NeverlandHeart
I know I won't get any extra points or anything, but I'm going to name them all! First, she's voiced by Tara Strong who also voices Raven, Kole, Teether, and Elasti-Girl!
13NeverlandHeartI know I won't get any extra points or anything, but I'm going to name them all! First, she's voiced by Tara Strong who also voices Raven, Kole, Teether, and Elasti-Girl!
3/26/2014 c16 2bluefire1765
Whoa. How do you do that. Like...I'm in awe of you amazingness.
Also...I'm not sure who Red X but i do know one thing. "He is not a hologram!''
2bluefire1765Whoa. How do you do that. Like...I'm in awe of you amazingness.
Also...I'm not sure who Red X but i do know one thing. "He is not a hologram!''