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8/23/2015 c1 Guest
I noticed him too!
8/19/2015 c1 kankusan
SQUEE! Ok, I literally giggled out loud when he came back dragging the tree. That was too cute for words, and (need I say it?) such a Ronon thing to do. :) This was a really adorable story, and again, I love the subtlety between the two characters. I mean, they're both tentative in their own way, and I think that fits them well. I like how you're painting him...make that everyone, actually. Very good stuff! Thanks for posting!
8/10/2015 c1 15daisyscrapper
Wow, there were many great stories I missed when I didn't log on for awhile!
Ronon just captured my heart here. I could imagine him glaring at everyone while he hauled it in.
4/19/2015 c1 Guest
Nice! Would be neat to continue... hint, hint
12/28/2013 c1 Everlovin
Not signed in right now, but LOVE this story. So sweet!
12/26/2013 c1 162Lorelei Candice Black
nice, I like it.
12/23/2013 c1 Guest
Lovely little fic, Bailey. I like that Ronon noticed something about Jenn that nobody else had. It made me laugh that John had made Ronon get a much smaller tree. It seems to me that people always end up getting a tree that is far too large. :-)
12/19/2013 c1 Guest
very nice - are you sure it's complete?
12/19/2013 c1 Shellbean
Hey there bailey1ak,
I loved your short, but as short implies it was too short. Ronon and Jennifer are one of my favorite pairings as well. It was short and sweet though and very well written. Thanks for sharing. Have a great Christmas and a great New Year. Shellbean:))
12/19/2013 c1 Flowerfairy30
That was a great story. I enjoyed it very much, but I love all of your stories.
12/19/2013 c1 ShaViva
Aww - this is so nice! Lots of lovely gems in there too, like Rodney's "What, he can't hold it until we get home?" LOL. Fav was Ronon telling Jenn he only noticed her ... so sweet and I can just see Ronon saying something like that, to the point but meaningful. Well done you! *hugs*
12/19/2013 c1 22hifield
What a wonderful Birthday surprise this morning to see your story posted ... I loved it! Christmas is such a magical time and a perfect setting for the two of them to take notice of each other. Loved Ronon's thoughts about mulling over the affect she had on him. I'm thinking this might be the perfect start to a longer story. :D

Thanks for sharing ... I can safely say it was the perfect start to my day!
12/19/2013 c1 zoomzoom0527
Wonderful story. I've really missed reading good Ronan/Keller vics.
12/19/2013 c1 58ladygris
I know you intended this to be a one-shot, but it could be so much more! A sweet Christmas romance for Jennifer and Ronon, one where Ronon learns about Christmas in a different way: from the woman he's coming to love.

Just my two cents. I liked this story more than most Ronon/Keller stories because it was so sweet and soft, for lack of a better way of saying it. Ronon noticed a wish that Keller had, and he tried to fulfill it.

Now, I just want to see what Keller will do with Ronon's assertion that the tree reminds him of his childhood home!
12/19/2013 c1 131LMXB
That was sweet. I hope there is a follow up!

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