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12/28/2020 c14 Guest
Sorry but my only criticism of this chapter is that you seemed to change your mind halfway through writing. Like Angela and the doctor working for santos, it doesn't make any sense. What was the whole point of helping Joe escape if they had him in the first place? To lure in Frank? He was already looking for Joe. And what was the point of Angela going to Tony?
10/16/2020 c1 24VintageRoseTaylor
Wow. Never saw that coming!
8/19/2020 c15 Guest
Please reread this chapter and fix grammatical problems, such as getting and got being used the wrong way.
8/19/2020 c14 JKG
“I’ll go get find your son” Doesn’t make sense and isn’t normal English. Otherwise it is a great story.
10/21/2019 c2 6drogorath
I think this routine is getting a bit repetitive. SPAG could be better.
10/21/2019 c1 drogorath
Damn amazing the last line.
7/25/2017 c28 5Countess of crime
I would love a Hardy boys movie I mean they made a Nancy Drew movie right
1/8/2016 c5 AJ
Way, too many, unnecessary, commas,.
2/28/2015 c7 Guest
Poor Joe, always gets into trouble...
1/13/2015 c28 Guest
I have read all the hardy boys, nancy drew, and nancy drew and hardy boy crossover book new and old. I have also read all the warrior books, percy jackson, 39 clues, twilight, harry potter, maximum ride, a gone novel series, vampire diaries, night world series, secret circle, everything else by LJ smith, vampire academy, lord of the rings, the hobbit, house of night, the outsiders etc...
Yeah I have no life whatsoever...
6/25/2014 c28 14Obsessivebookdiva
I myself have extreme PTSD in certain situations. People with PTSD can act normal, but in certain situations they panic. And that's ok, we've been through a lot. I'd like to state that this is a great story, but there are some errors you might want to go back and fix

Peace and all that jazz,
Lizzy
5/7/2014 c28 RandomGuest101
Loved the last part when Chet started talking about how the Hardy's could 'write a book' about their cases, and just taking it from there. All in all a very good story! I don't read FF as much as I used to, but I'll be back for sure! Keep up the great work! All the best, RG101.
5/5/2014 c28 Guest
Just finished reading this story. As a life long hardy boy reader and fan this is just great. Thank u for writing. I have enjoyed the hardy boys (especially Joe) for a long long time. Thanks again.
3/30/2014 c28 18Beaner97
Lol. Love the referral to the books and tv show. :) Antonio is so cute. Please do more soon.
3/24/2014 c26 Beaner97
Yay! I love it. Please update soon.
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