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12/22/2013 c5 1Cynthia Darling
Say whaaaat? This just got exciting!
12/20/2013 c3 Cynthia Darling
Woah. This intense, in an awesome way that is. This is so cool! Too bad the HB/ND story didn't work out.
12/20/2013 c1 Cynthia Darling
Woah.
12/20/2013 c3 Babybluehun0327
I don't usually review stories, but these chapters are really good!
Wow, poor Tony...his life is falling a part. I wonder how he was a witness to a murder...and I feel like there is more to Angela that we don't know yet.
Keep this story up! I enjoy it so far :)
12/20/2013 c3 randomguest101
Yay! Good to see you back EJ, I've been waiting for your next story, and boy is it a doosy! Tony witness to a murder! Tony with a kid! I do not trust that Angile or whatever her name is. If her father runs her life, then how did she get to come to America to see Tony, and for what? Just, to tell him he has a kid? More like to keep him quiet! Sorry if I ruined the ending or a twist. BTW I think it's good not to worry about your grammer, especially when you first write something. I wish I could not care : ) Can't wait for more. Will be reading! : )
RG101
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