
3/4/2015 c1 fairytailfangirl
It was a little cheesy...a LITTLE? more like a LOT! but I really like your story. ;) type on!
It was a little cheesy...a LITTLE? more like a LOT! but I really like your story. ;) type on!
2/3/2015 c1 fairytailfangirl
you went too fast but thats okay. it was still good! ;)
you went too fast but thats okay. it was still good! ;)
1/28/2015 c1 TribalRose
Cheesy? Yeah definitely Went to fast? Hmmm maybe... Absolutely beautiful? Hell yea it is! Nice writing, I don't normally read one shots but this was beautiful
Cheesy? Yeah definitely Went to fast? Hmmm maybe... Absolutely beautiful? Hell yea it is! Nice writing, I don't normally read one shots but this was beautiful
11/24/2014 c1 MarkoHeyooxccss
My eyesss... The feels.. 3
My eyesss... The feels.. 3
10/12/2014 c1 Fanfictions4ever
alil to short for me could have been drag out a lil more like if he did die a few times hert failure an such an end up in a coma like state that would be a good story
alil to short for me could have been drag out a lil more like if he did die a few times hert failure an such an end up in a coma like state that would be a good story
6/15/2014 c1 ILuvWinxClub
Yay! GrayZa!
Yay! GrayZa!
4/12/2014 c1 Guest
LLLOOOOOOOOVVVVVE IT!
KEEP CALM
AND
CARRY ON
WRITING!
:-) ;-)
Review Written By
Victoria Skylock
LLLOOOOOOOOVVVVVE IT!
KEEP CALM
AND
CARRY ON
WRITING!
:-) ;-)
Review Written By
Victoria Skylock
1/8/2014 c1 Nalulover13
I LOVE THIS STORY!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
12/19/2013 c1
13PatartoChip
Nahh that wasn't too short was a nice little one shot to read and cute feels XD I knew Gray wouldn't die! Well I was like noo he better not so that was a relief XD great job

Nahh that wasn't too short was a nice little one shot to read and cute feels XD I knew Gray wouldn't die! Well I was like noo he better not so that was a relief XD great job
12/19/2013 c1
3docmdportgas
It doens't seem rushed to me... I like it! And you are on a roll today you updated all your fics! :))

It doens't seem rushed to me... I like it! And you are on a roll today you updated all your fics! :))