for The White Wave1/17/2016 c6 
5ulktante
Wow, a nice idea. Have not seen a time travel story with this idea until now. I hope you will pick it up sometime in teh future and complete it!
5ulktanteWow, a nice idea. Have not seen a time travel story with this idea until now. I hope you will pick it up sometime in teh future and complete it!
1/11/2016 c6 rat
This was a very interesting take.
I've just started rediscovering the fandom after years and I'd like to thank you for writing. I was delightfully entertained.
I'd love to see more but understand if there's more interesting things happening around you. :D
Have a nice day~
This was a very interesting take.
I've just started rediscovering the fandom after years and I'd like to thank you for writing. I was delightfully entertained.
I'd love to see more but understand if there's more interesting things happening around you. :D
Have a nice day~
12/21/2015 c1 Guest
Sweetie! Even though it's been almost 2 years since the last update, I still check your account every few days. The story is great, your fans are still with you, the only thing missing is the update, although I hope it'll come soon! Good luck! :
Sweetie! Even though it's been almost 2 years since the last update, I still check your account every few days. The story is great, your fans are still with you, the only thing missing is the update, although I hope it'll come soon! Good luck! :
12/15/2015 c6 1Danneyland
I thought that maybe the person whose magic stabilized Harry's was James' or Voldemort's, lol. I was like, "OMG! What if it was Voldemort?" and that idea took hold even though Harry was in the middle of the Ministry building. Either that, or I figured it'd be James - it was a bit obvious for me.
Harry should really try to pull his potions grades up and get that proper Healer's degree. Maybe you could give Harry a bit of a quirk: I just keep thinking that if I were to learn potions, I'd have to know the "why don't you mix these?" or the "why do you chop these this way?" or "what is what makes a certain method inportant?" or whatever it may be. If I don't know the why behind it or if I deem it unimportant enough, often I'll just ignore those instructions and do it my own way, to see if I could figure out a better way to do it or just because. Maybe you could have Harry do something similar, if you haven't already written this part? It was just a thought to provide Harry with one of those quirks that Harry mentions when he had that "moving away" party before he jumped timelines. Or maybe I just want to see myself in print a bit, who knows ...
Oh, I came from Victory Day, too. I'm pretty sure I reviewed (or at least favourited/followed), so maybe you recognize me. And why can't as fanfiction be as good as yours! I mean really. I want to continue reading but you haven't updated :(
1DanneylandI thought that maybe the person whose magic stabilized Harry's was James' or Voldemort's, lol. I was like, "OMG! What if it was Voldemort?" and that idea took hold even though Harry was in the middle of the Ministry building. Either that, or I figured it'd be James - it was a bit obvious for me.
Harry should really try to pull his potions grades up and get that proper Healer's degree. Maybe you could give Harry a bit of a quirk: I just keep thinking that if I were to learn potions, I'd have to know the "why don't you mix these?" or the "why do you chop these this way?" or "what is what makes a certain method inportant?" or whatever it may be. If I don't know the why behind it or if I deem it unimportant enough, often I'll just ignore those instructions and do it my own way, to see if I could figure out a better way to do it or just because. Maybe you could have Harry do something similar, if you haven't already written this part? It was just a thought to provide Harry with one of those quirks that Harry mentions when he had that "moving away" party before he jumped timelines. Or maybe I just want to see myself in print a bit, who knows ...
Oh, I came from Victory Day, too. I'm pretty sure I reviewed (or at least favourited/followed), so maybe you recognize me. And why can't as fanfiction be as good as yours! I mean really. I want to continue reading but you haven't updated :(
11/20/2015 c6 Ciba
I really like this story so far! The issues brought up are just complex enough to set up very interesting situations for Harry to deal with. I noticed that it has been a while since you updated, I hope that doesn't mean you are no longer working on this story because it has great potential!
I hope you update soon!
Thank you!
I really like this story so far! The issues brought up are just complex enough to set up very interesting situations for Harry to deal with. I noticed that it has been a while since you updated, I hope that doesn't mean you are no longer working on this story because it has great potential!
I hope you update soon!
Thank you!
11/14/2015 c6 i'mnothungryfordogfood
This is one very interesting time travel fiction. I hope you still plan to continue and finish this wonderful story. Personally I can't wait for harry to meet tom. And I like how you portrayed James potter, he seemed quite reasonable unlike how many authors like to describe him as some typical jock. I love your Regulus and I hope you don't plan on killing him off. Harry's character too is very interesting, I find him quite cute with the way you described him, all in all a beautifully written story and I would hate for it to be left incomplete. Please do update soon, and a big thanks for sharing your incredible talent.
This is one very interesting time travel fiction. I hope you still plan to continue and finish this wonderful story. Personally I can't wait for harry to meet tom. And I like how you portrayed James potter, he seemed quite reasonable unlike how many authors like to describe him as some typical jock. I love your Regulus and I hope you don't plan on killing him off. Harry's character too is very interesting, I find him quite cute with the way you described him, all in all a beautifully written story and I would hate for it to be left incomplete. Please do update soon, and a big thanks for sharing your incredible talent.
11/5/2015 c6 xalitude
Such an amazing story! I've read A Victory Day a while back and I must say you've obviously become better at writing since then. Not that you were bad to begin with xD I really hope you will continue this story, it was truly a letdown to realize that there are only 6 chapters yet.
Such an amazing story! I've read A Victory Day a while back and I must say you've obviously become better at writing since then. Not that you were bad to begin with xD I really hope you will continue this story, it was truly a letdown to realize that there are only 6 chapters yet.
10/28/2015 c6 Guest
More? Please? Pretty pretty please?
More? Please? Pretty pretty please?
9/3/2015 c6 2Fic's Sly Lover
Well everything aside, as much as I am in favour of gap/time taken during updates to get awesome and top notch updates; there is a time where one waiting for one chapter might get a bit crazy. So I would like to warn you not to take a lot of time and come back to us with this story :D just a nice reminder because, I REALLY WANT TO READ MORE OF THIS!
Thank you for writing this.
Yours Truly,
Sly.
2Fic's Sly LoverWell everything aside, as much as I am in favour of gap/time taken during updates to get awesome and top notch updates; there is a time where one waiting for one chapter might get a bit crazy. So I would like to warn you not to take a lot of time and come back to us with this story :D just a nice reminder because, I REALLY WANT TO READ MORE OF THIS!
Thank you for writing this.
Yours Truly,
Sly.
8/28/2015 c6 Guest
I really like how you've slowly built up this fic so far. There's a lot of detail in everything. Really thoughtful. Like, giving the dark side an understandable political stance. Giving Harry a really clear goal from the start, which for me reading built up anticipation and interest. The characters feel distinct and natural, even the side ones. Voldemort's portrayal was really good. One part of his character that I liked reading was the idea of him wanting someone to challenge him or not fear him, but also doing everything that he can to make that not so and knowing he couldn't realistically have that type of relationship with anyone. Even those that he's known for a long time. It was a good contrast for his character, especially with knowing that Harry would be coming and will give Voldemort what he wanted. I also like that Harry is super powered but there is a reason for why that is, which is awesomely well done.
I really like how you've slowly built up this fic so far. There's a lot of detail in everything. Really thoughtful. Like, giving the dark side an understandable political stance. Giving Harry a really clear goal from the start, which for me reading built up anticipation and interest. The characters feel distinct and natural, even the side ones. Voldemort's portrayal was really good. One part of his character that I liked reading was the idea of him wanting someone to challenge him or not fear him, but also doing everything that he can to make that not so and knowing he couldn't realistically have that type of relationship with anyone. Even those that he's known for a long time. It was a good contrast for his character, especially with knowing that Harry would be coming and will give Voldemort what he wanted. I also like that Harry is super powered but there is a reason for why that is, which is awesomely well done.