for Clearing Mist1/1 c10 OriginalDrumy
Okay I am very late but I don’t see how her having a contract with cats and her being a sensor-nin is making her overpowered or Mary Sue. Your idea of sending emotions is also good so I don’t mind.
Anyway I’m glad I found your story hard finding ones like this
Okay I am very late but I don’t see how her having a contract with cats and her being a sensor-nin is making her overpowered or Mary Sue. Your idea of sending emotions is also good so I don’t mind.
Anyway I’m glad I found your story hard finding ones like this
12/31/2022 c1 Guest
I stopped reading this fanfic so I could watch Naruto Shippuden first, I recommended it to my friends and they loved it . Author, you have a great writing style, I loved the way you changed canon and overall it’s a good fic. You should feel proud of what you’ve done.
I stopped reading this fanfic so I could watch Naruto Shippuden first, I recommended it to my friends and they loved it . Author, you have a great writing style, I loved the way you changed canon and overall it’s a good fic. You should feel proud of what you’ve done.
11/3/2022 c30 
1Phsycres Wolf-Brother
Gone too far, yeah, I'm gone again It's gone on too long, tell you how it ends I'm sitting on the edge with my two best friends one's a bottle of pills, and one's a bottle of gin I'm 20 stories up, yeah, up at the top I polished off this bottle, now it's pushing me off asphalt to me has never looked so soft I bet my momma found my letter, now she's calling the cops I gotta take this opportunity before I miss it cause now I hear the sirens and they're off in the distance
A great one for this would have been “how did we get here? I used to k ow you soooo wellparamore decode)
Great story so far
1Phsycres Wolf-BrotherGone too far, yeah, I'm gone again It's gone on too long, tell you how it ends I'm sitting on the edge with my two best friends one's a bottle of pills, and one's a bottle of gin I'm 20 stories up, yeah, up at the top I polished off this bottle, now it's pushing me off asphalt to me has never looked so soft I bet my momma found my letter, now she's calling the cops I gotta take this opportunity before I miss it cause now I hear the sirens and they're off in the distance
A great one for this would have been “how did we get here? I used to k ow you soooo wellparamore decode)
Great story so far
9/7/2022 c3 arispuffer
A few year late but I would like to habe baby shark beimg throw in hands of plotting mother please
Thank you very very much foe the story
A few year late but I would like to habe baby shark beimg throw in hands of plotting mother please
Thank you very very much foe the story
8/26/2022 c7 jingerr
every time I hear kiss Amaze name for her I want to keep calling her calico kittens LOL
every time I hear kiss Amaze name for her I want to keep calling her calico kittens LOL
7/3/2022 c30 Guest
I hate how much of the “weak link” oc comes across because u try not to make her Mary sue. Like I’d prefer if she got her op screentime especially since she’s amongst op characters as a leader figure. It’s annoying that shes always being ‘captured’/‘injured’/‘undermined’ just to make her nor seem too powerful. She seems more like an A rank missing nin than S sometimes
I hate how much of the “weak link” oc comes across because u try not to make her Mary sue. Like I’d prefer if she got her op screentime especially since she’s amongst op characters as a leader figure. It’s annoying that shes always being ‘captured’/‘injured’/‘undermined’ just to make her nor seem too powerful. She seems more like an A rank missing nin than S sometimes
6/10/2022 c64 imAwonder
Love this! Love love LOVE everything! Glad that this centered around them They deserved the best KUDOS much️️️️️
Love this! Love love LOVE everything! Glad that this centered around them They deserved the best KUDOS much️️️️️
4/29/2022 c64 2Winterislate
Thank you for the amazing read! I enjoyed your OCs journey from start to finish.
2WinterislateThank you for the amazing read! I enjoyed your OCs journey from start to finish.
3/23/2022 c4 StoriesMakeLife
Tne mother is cunning and effective, Kisame is just as he is - valuing trust and hating liars, and an adult in a child's body somehow doesn't feel as unnatural as it could be. Might be the brutal world of Mist.
Thank you.
Tne mother is cunning and effective, Kisame is just as he is - valuing trust and hating liars, and an adult in a child's body somehow doesn't feel as unnatural as it could be. Might be the brutal world of Mist.
Thank you.