for The Star in the Darkness9/22/2022 c11 Shadow
Man, hopefully they survive of dark yusei dealing. And great chapter, hopefully you update later.
Man, hopefully they survive of dark yusei dealing. And great chapter, hopefully you update later.
9/21/2022 c11 Zach
I so excited for the next chapter. To see dark yusei against his friends and new dark dragon.
I so excited for the next chapter. To see dark yusei against his friends and new dark dragon.
9/16/2022 c11 
10Zafrand
Slow starting but understandable. You still managed to keep my attention for 11 chapters. lol. But things seem to be getting good now. Can't wait for the next chapter.
10ZafrandSlow starting but understandable. You still managed to keep my attention for 11 chapters. lol. But things seem to be getting good now. Can't wait for the next chapter.
9/14/2022 c11 15DragonKnight15
Well it's been ages... not sure how to make this review but I'll try.
Between us, Trap Stun's effect works until the end of the turn it was activated and it works on all other traps. So Defense Draw is technically negated. Jack's trap doesn't miss or negate the attack sadly, unlike when Kaiba did it in Battle City (different rules) and Junk Berserker's effect isn't a quick effect. But whatever, that's like not a big deal as it doesn't affect the build up of the duel.
The duel overall was decent. It was good and I enjoy it. Also now Dark Yusei makes his move and it was great to see like stuff with the Signer Dragons. Excellent job there!
15DragonKnight15Well it's been ages... not sure how to make this review but I'll try.
Between us, Trap Stun's effect works until the end of the turn it was activated and it works on all other traps. So Defense Draw is technically negated. Jack's trap doesn't miss or negate the attack sadly, unlike when Kaiba did it in Battle City (different rules) and Junk Berserker's effect isn't a quick effect. But whatever, that's like not a big deal as it doesn't affect the build up of the duel.
The duel overall was decent. It was good and I enjoy it. Also now Dark Yusei makes his move and it was great to see like stuff with the Signer Dragons. Excellent job there!
11/22/2019 c10 Guest
I hope you update soon. Your story’s just getting to the interesting part. I always wanted to see Yusei and Aki in a tag-team duel in the anime, especially for a turbo duel. We sadly didn’t see her turbo duel again in the anime after she lost to Andre in just two turns (really poorly written duel in my opinion). Hopefully, we’ll also see some new plant monsters and support cards from her deck. I only recall her having Splendid Rose and Black Rose Dragon in her extra deck, so it would be cool if there were more monsters, like Queen of Thorns.
I liked how you’ve introduced Yusei’s old friends from the Satellite into the story. I also hope Aki, Luna, Leo, and Crow all get evolved versions on their signer dragons as well. I know it was partly due to plot reasons, but I always thought it was unfair that Yusei and Jack got so many upgraded versions of their dragons, while the rest of the signers didn’t get any (unless you include Lifestream Dragon).
I hope you update soon. Your story’s just getting to the interesting part. I always wanted to see Yusei and Aki in a tag-team duel in the anime, especially for a turbo duel. We sadly didn’t see her turbo duel again in the anime after she lost to Andre in just two turns (really poorly written duel in my opinion). Hopefully, we’ll also see some new plant monsters and support cards from her deck. I only recall her having Splendid Rose and Black Rose Dragon in her extra deck, so it would be cool if there were more monsters, like Queen of Thorns.
I liked how you’ve introduced Yusei’s old friends from the Satellite into the story. I also hope Aki, Luna, Leo, and Crow all get evolved versions on their signer dragons as well. I know it was partly due to plot reasons, but I always thought it was unfair that Yusei and Jack got so many upgraded versions of their dragons, while the rest of the signers didn’t get any (unless you include Lifestream Dragon).
9/5/2019 c10 22poetrymagic12
This is how you end the chapter? What's going to happen next? Is this what I been waiting for...but you never finished...to see more of the Evil Yusei I was expecting...I want to read that!
UPDATE PLEASE!
22poetrymagic12This is how you end the chapter? What's going to happen next? Is this what I been waiting for...but you never finished...to see more of the Evil Yusei I was expecting...I want to read that!
UPDATE PLEASE!
9/5/2019 c9 poetrymagic12
This story isn't the dark I was expecting you were telling me? I thought you meant he was going to be fool on evil or something like possessed but he's more moody and depressed. I love Yusei and Aki interaction but a bit disappointed on it. I am sorry.
This story isn't the dark I was expecting you were telling me? I thought you meant he was going to be fool on evil or something like possessed but he's more moody and depressed. I love Yusei and Aki interaction but a bit disappointed on it. I am sorry.
9/5/2019 c8 poetrymagic12
First Crow switched to first name basis with Aki...so why is he calling her by her last name. Especially since this is after the Arc Cradle?
Jack and Carly being a couple...because it was canon before everything was reset. So it makes sense you did that...I do it in my stories too.
Aki going after Yusei...naturally why wouldn't she because of her feelings for him and the fact the both of them saved each other...plus Aki is the most likely person to understand...
First Crow switched to first name basis with Aki...so why is he calling her by her last name. Especially since this is after the Arc Cradle?
Jack and Carly being a couple...because it was canon before everything was reset. So it makes sense you did that...I do it in my stories too.
Aki going after Yusei...naturally why wouldn't she because of her feelings for him and the fact the both of them saved each other...plus Aki is the most likely person to understand...
9/5/2019 c7 poetrymagic12
So Stardust is the one that's doing all this...? I am still trying to make sense out of everything...
So Stardust is the one that's doing all this...? I am still trying to make sense out of everything...
9/5/2019 c6 poetrymagic12
Aki's tsundere...thanking Yusei before hitting him for taken so long and yelling at him. LOL.
Aki's tsundere...thanking Yusei before hitting him for taken so long and yelling at him. LOL.
9/5/2019 c5 poetrymagic12
Still not fond of duels in stories...that's why I never do them...namely you have to know all the card effects and what not...gets too much...
Still not fond of duels in stories...that's why I never do them...namely you have to know all the card effects and what not...gets too much...
9/5/2019 c3 poetrymagic12
So sweet...Aki kissed Yusei...sigh. I can't get enough of the two together. Is it Divine that's trying to break them apart or someone...I am still confused?
It's AU so it's fine if they're out of character...
So sweet...Aki kissed Yusei...sigh. I can't get enough of the two together. Is it Divine that's trying to break them apart or someone...I am still confused?
It's AU so it's fine if they're out of character...
9/5/2019 c2 poetrymagic12
So cute! Got the hug I wanted between Yusei and Aki...Jack and Crow had to ruin her love confession with an argument of course...so annoying.
So cute! Got the hug I wanted between Yusei and Aki...Jack and Crow had to ruin her love confession with an argument of course...so annoying.
9/5/2019 c1 poetrymagic12
You can see how much Yusei loves Aki...is someone luring Yusei to the darkness in his dreams? That was the vibe I was getting...can't wait to read more...onto chapter 2...
You can see how much Yusei loves Aki...is someone luring Yusei to the darkness in his dreams? That was the vibe I was getting...can't wait to read more...onto chapter 2...