
2/18/2021 c17 Orihime-18
In this moment hime give himself freely not a bit of hesitation since they are already married and that her dream to give herself to the man she loves but within no marriage and I’m just glad ichi married her first before taking her although it’s because of a circumstance of a situation and to save hime...it’s better if there’s no needed circumstance for him to offer to marry her but out of realization he was deeply in love already although he said he is already (thinking) still it’s the fact he offered to save hime...still it’s a great ichihime story...I was just confused on that part when ichi said why he kissed her (on that first kiss) as if he has feelings on her when he wasn’t and then when said that there’s no lust if there’s no love then on later chapter it was resealed he’s been having girl affair as bedpost and having even mistress when he said there’s lust if there’s love...so does it mean that he feels love still on those he used as in bed and in those mistresss to think he said that y he kissed hime as if he have feelings on that first kiss so I assume that everytime he kissed someone there’s always feelings involved (confusing)...what I like was hime self preservation even she loves ichi she still have self respect dignity and preserved herself coz she wants everything after marriage (that was the awesome part on this story)
In this moment hime give himself freely not a bit of hesitation since they are already married and that her dream to give herself to the man she loves but within no marriage and I’m just glad ichi married her first before taking her although it’s because of a circumstance of a situation and to save hime...it’s better if there’s no needed circumstance for him to offer to marry her but out of realization he was deeply in love already although he said he is already (thinking) still it’s the fact he offered to save hime...still it’s a great ichihime story...I was just confused on that part when ichi said why he kissed her (on that first kiss) as if he has feelings on her when he wasn’t and then when said that there’s no lust if there’s no love then on later chapter it was resealed he’s been having girl affair as bedpost and having even mistress when he said there’s lust if there’s love...so does it mean that he feels love still on those he used as in bed and in those mistresss to think he said that y he kissed hime as if he have feelings on that first kiss so I assume that everytime he kissed someone there’s always feelings involved (confusing)...what I like was hime self preservation even she loves ichi she still have self respect dignity and preserved herself coz she wants everything after marriage (that was the awesome part on this story)
8/10/2016 c17 Tlinga
Fantastic, superb story I love how there was a great amount of character development which lead up to this amazing finale. Truly amazing.
Fantastic, superb story I love how there was a great amount of character development which lead up to this amazing finale. Truly amazing.
5/6/2016 c17 Guest
Luv the story beautiful!
Luv the story beautiful!
3/22/2016 c17 Guest
Beautiful, absolutely loved it.
Beautiful, absolutely loved it.
11/3/2015 c17 hachimitsu10
Oh I loved this story of yours! its really good and I would request you to write an epilogue for it... the ichihime chemistry is great and the plot is interesting. .. keep it up...
Oh I loved this story of yours! its really good and I would request you to write an epilogue for it... the ichihime chemistry is great and the plot is interesting. .. keep it up...
10/22/2015 c1 nalu is superior y'all
Sugoi. Say, I already read all seventeen chapters but chose to review my entire opinion on chapter one. First and foremost, your story contains only small spelling errors I'd be glad to tell you if you'd like, and no majorly incorrect errors. Secondly, your author notes are very positive, and right to the point. Most authors nowadays either leave no A/N, leave the smallest bit of information, or right a whole book. Your A/N's are ones I actually read. Kudos to you for such straightforwardness. It's a skill for the books. Lastly, I absolutely loved this story! It was romantic and daring, filled with action and drama and some sides of humor. It was perfect. The story itself was fantastic, but the dialogue along with the emotions and characters are just magnificent. Superb job on this story. It was a good read all the way through! #NeverGotBored #WritingGameTooStrong #A1Writer
Sugoi. Say, I already read all seventeen chapters but chose to review my entire opinion on chapter one. First and foremost, your story contains only small spelling errors I'd be glad to tell you if you'd like, and no majorly incorrect errors. Secondly, your author notes are very positive, and right to the point. Most authors nowadays either leave no A/N, leave the smallest bit of information, or right a whole book. Your A/N's are ones I actually read. Kudos to you for such straightforwardness. It's a skill for the books. Lastly, I absolutely loved this story! It was romantic and daring, filled with action and drama and some sides of humor. It was perfect. The story itself was fantastic, but the dialogue along with the emotions and characters are just magnificent. Superb job on this story. It was a good read all the way through! #NeverGotBored #WritingGameTooStrong #A1Writer
9/29/2015 c17 4thkage
phewwwww...
one chapter with lemoness...
that really a good wedding night...hehe...
luv the story...
at the beginning...obviously i had no idea bout this story...relate to vampire...
i luv vampires...
bcoz of your really secretive summary...and...look at lot of reviews...
i thought...it will be very interesting story..
and indeed...it was really interesting story for me...
thanks for writing this awesome story...
9/10
phewwwww...
one chapter with lemoness...
that really a good wedding night...hehe...
luv the story...
at the beginning...obviously i had no idea bout this story...relate to vampire...
i luv vampires...
bcoz of your really secretive summary...and...look at lot of reviews...
i thought...it will be very interesting story..
and indeed...it was really interesting story for me...
thanks for writing this awesome story...
9/10