
3/10/2017 c3 OTPwarriorPrincess
could use some work but its good its has alot of potential keep up the good work
could use some work but its good its has alot of potential keep up the good work
2/7/2014 c3 Guest
Is english your first language? Oh, you really need to fix your summary as well. Is is comical just how bad it is.
Is english your first language? Oh, you really need to fix your summary as well. Is is comical just how bad it is.
1/13/2014 c2 Guest
Sometimes short chapters can be cute and satisfying. In this case they are a badly written joke. Think about it "caption" . . .
Sometimes short chapters can be cute and satisfying. In this case they are a badly written joke. Think about it "caption" . . .