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3/8/2015 c14 3Panther Hardraad
I read the entirety of this at once and I like your take on the story. A different server means recreating the entire anime from scratch and you do it well.
1/15/2014 c11 dracos24
One of my favorite Log Horizon Fanfics so far, and feels the closest to the Light Novels. While I don't dislike the "chatroom style", as it lends a certain flow to the story, you write action fairly well, and it would be nice to see a better balance.

You've established a decent array of characters, but I think its time to start pitting them against some obstacles that they may not succeed at.

I had fun reading the events of Chapter 11, but it felt more like an outline that needed fleshing out with some environmental descriptions and observations.
1/1/2014 c2 10JohnTitor
Your writing style re minds me of Log Horizon, but the cast being"legends" seems a bit cliche. Also, I don't like the "chatroom" way of dialogue.
1/1/2014 c1 JohnTitor
Neat. Dragon summon seems OP but w/e.

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