for New Devil of The Gremory House3/15/2014 c2 Guest
Enjoy the read. Sopa back pass it on. Need votes by 19th.
Enjoy the read. Sopa back pass it on. Need votes by 19th.
3/14/2014 c1 Guest
I want more of this story please. It is really good
I want more of this story please. It is really good
3/4/2014 c1 Guest
Yo bro I just wanted to pop in and say that I see real potential for this fic and that u shouldn't give up on it. Peace out! See u in next chap. Hopefully.
Yo bro I just wanted to pop in and say that I see real potential for this fic and that u shouldn't give up on it. Peace out! See u in next chap. Hopefully.
2/23/2014 c1 
7Dreaming of the Phoenix
An odd start. Not really sure how I feel about it. Can't say it was good, can't say it was bad. The best I can give it is "somewhat interesting." Though I'll say this much, having no spelling errors is a major bonus. Thus, as things stands right now, I'd give it a 6/10. I won't flame, but I won't be extolling it either. I'll simply have to wait for an update to see where you're going to take it.
7Dreaming of the PhoenixAn odd start. Not really sure how I feel about it. Can't say it was good, can't say it was bad. The best I can give it is "somewhat interesting." Though I'll say this much, having no spelling errors is a major bonus. Thus, as things stands right now, I'd give it a 6/10. I won't flame, but I won't be extolling it either. I'll simply have to wait for an update to see where you're going to take it.
1/6/2014 c1 CoG.EMIYA
How strong is naruto to your story?... will he still have his shinobi skills?... also, is he still a jinchuuruki?... I cant wait for the next update... I suggest also to not to give him a sacred gear...
How strong is naruto to your story?... will he still have his shinobi skills?... also, is he still a jinchuuruki?... I cant wait for the next update... I suggest also to not to give him a sacred gear...
1/1/2014 c1 13Have a Little Feith
Looking forward to the next chapter. That finale in Smith's DW career was kinda underwhelming for me.
13Have a Little FeithLooking forward to the next chapter. That finale in Smith's DW career was kinda underwhelming for me.
12/29/2013 c1 3The Immortal Siegfried
I would rather Naruto be a different piece and Sirzechs gave Rias a mutation peice since in each ratting game you can only use 8 pawns, 2 knights, 2 rooks, 2 bishops and 1 Queen. Mutation pieces can be used in place of more pieces.
3The Immortal SiegfriedI would rather Naruto be a different piece and Sirzechs gave Rias a mutation peice since in each ratting game you can only use 8 pawns, 2 knights, 2 rooks, 2 bishops and 1 Queen. Mutation pieces can be used in place of more pieces.