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5Samnamikaze23
I like this fic some how similar to one narutoxhighschool Xover I've read before but I like this!
5Samnamikaze23I like this fic some how similar to one narutoxhighschool Xover I've read before but I like this!
3/16/2014 c2 2XNiceBoy
what's the story mate Naruto x Rias? if it is true please do not change the couple Naruto, because I really like to pair Naruto x Rias
2XNiceBoywhat's the story mate Naruto x Rias? if it is true please do not change the couple Naruto, because I really like to pair Naruto x Rias
3/16/2014 c2 Guest
Narutos fucking hated and weak worst story ever
Narutos fucking hated and weak worst story ever
3/16/2014 c2 Friaku
Oh wow this was another awesome chapter. I like how you've set Naruto's personality and kept it throughout both chapters. I look forward to seeing more in the future
Best regards
Friaku
Oh wow this was another awesome chapter. I like how you've set Naruto's personality and kept it throughout both chapters. I look forward to seeing more in the future
Best regards
Friaku
3/16/2014 c2 Guest
oh, very good chapter. You did exactly what you set out to do. Concise straight forward and very to the point. After the somewhat failure of the end game version r 's last chapter this is a very good read.
Keep up the good work.
Cat.
oh, very good chapter. You did exactly what you set out to do. Concise straight forward and very to the point. After the somewhat failure of the end game version r 's last chapter this is a very good read.
Keep up the good work.
Cat.
3/16/2014 c2 SPark681
Well nice story though I wonder what Naruto meant when he said "Because I've already accepted it. Once before" sounds like he died before maybe that's why he really doesn't care. Anyways keep up the great work!
Well nice story though I wonder what Naruto meant when he said "Because I've already accepted it. Once before" sounds like he died before maybe that's why he really doesn't care. Anyways keep up the great work!
3/15/2014 c2 hanipman
This is surprisingly well done. Given it did take three months for an update, but I can ignore that for work of a higher quality than most of the Naruto author base.
This is surprisingly well done. Given it did take three months for an update, but I can ignore that for work of a higher quality than most of the Naruto author base.
3/15/2014 c2 21SSJ3 Kyuubi Gohan
Hmm not too bad, rather interesting and it is good to see Naruto isn't blindly following Rias.
21SSJ3 Kyuubi GohanHmm not too bad, rather interesting and it is good to see Naruto isn't blindly following Rias.
3/15/2014 c2 M.D. Hurricane
So Naruto has to find a new drive to power himself, to light his resolve and return it to the inferno maelstrom it previously was compared to this slow burning embet that looks like it'll sputter and die at even the slightest of breezes
So Naruto has to find a new drive to power himself, to light his resolve and return it to the inferno maelstrom it previously was compared to this slow burning embet that looks like it'll sputter and die at even the slightest of breezes
3/15/2014 c2 1EVA-Saiyajin
I like how Naruto is actually trying to stay out of the whole supernatural business. It's interesting and new. I sincerely hope he continues-because he's not the kind of person to let someone drag him into things he doesn't want to be in, especially not if that someone says she's his "master" and he her "servant" or "slave". It should be amusing watching Rias grow increasingly frustrated with his refusal to obey her, when she was so confident at first.
And I like his take on how they'd both truly died.
1EVA-SaiyajinI like how Naruto is actually trying to stay out of the whole supernatural business. It's interesting and new. I sincerely hope he continues-because he's not the kind of person to let someone drag him into things he doesn't want to be in, especially not if that someone says she's his "master" and he her "servant" or "slave". It should be amusing watching Rias grow increasingly frustrated with his refusal to obey her, when she was so confident at first.
And I like his take on how they'd both truly died.
3/15/2014 c2 DragonOfApocalypse
Thank you for tha chap!
I had to re-read the first chap to remember a little :)
I enjoy this chap
Is this a harem? :
I know Naruto is paired worth Rias (Yayy!) but if this is a harem can Akeno, Kuroka and Serfall be too? :D
Please? Maybe Gabriel too :3
Thank you again!
Have a nice day!
Thank you for tha chap!
I had to re-read the first chap to remember a little :)
I enjoy this chap
Is this a harem? :
I know Naruto is paired worth Rias (Yayy!) but if this is a harem can Akeno, Kuroka and Serfall be too? :D
Please? Maybe Gabriel too :3
Thank you again!
Have a nice day!
3/15/2014 c2 nad destroyer
Ah I see so you just rushed that first chapter then without thinking about where you wanted to take the story? Its still pretty good considering the lack of forethought.
Eh... I wanna read more. *sigh* Well its a nice second chapter. Progresses well. I don't see how its logical for Naruto to have nothing to do with the Occult club though. He doesn't seem to get he is a devil now and he'll be hunted just because.
Ah I see so you just rushed that first chapter then without thinking about where you wanted to take the story? Its still pretty good considering the lack of forethought.
Eh... I wanna read more. *sigh* Well its a nice second chapter. Progresses well. I don't see how its logical for Naruto to have nothing to do with the Occult club though. He doesn't seem to get he is a devil now and he'll be hunted just because.
3/15/2014 c2 Strife666
awesome chapter! i'm eagerly waiting for the chapters that you will release this month.
awesome chapter! i'm eagerly waiting for the chapters that you will release this month.