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I'm still kinda hoping for Issei to get killed soon. It'd be hilarious if he dies to something stupid like being about to practice an attack but getting distracted by Gasper hugging Asia or something, and then dieing when his tecnique backfires on him.
I'm still kinda hoping for Issei to get killed soon. It'd be hilarious if he dies to something stupid like being about to practice an attack but getting distracted by Gasper hugging Asia or something, and then dieing when his tecnique backfires on him.
2/17 c69 Squeeker8
Thank you, Author, for taking the time to fix this chapter. I had a feeling you would, and put off finishing it until then and let me just say, THIS is the quality I expect from you. Even if it means waiting another week or month, that doesn't matter so long as you're giving your absolute best. The difference between the previous chapter 69 and this updated version are night and day, and I want to say thank you for fixing it.Д) YES!
Thank you, Author, for taking the time to fix this chapter. I had a feeling you would, and put off finishing it until then and let me just say, THIS is the quality I expect from you. Even if it means waiting another week or month, that doesn't matter so long as you're giving your absolute best. The difference between the previous chapter 69 and this updated version are night and day, and I want to say thank you for fixing it.Д) YES!
2/10 c37 Apple424
Holy hell finally man u were killing me, that speech was the cutest thing i ever saw. The story was a bit hard to get into but now it really good and funny.
Holy hell finally man u were killing me, that speech was the cutest thing i ever saw. The story was a bit hard to get into but now it really good and funny.
2/9 c22 kratos264
Kurama is only here to be weirdly kind to everyone and annoy naruto he’s reduced to a comedy bit
Kurama is only here to be weirdly kind to everyone and annoy naruto he’s reduced to a comedy bit
2/9 c22 kratos264
So has kurama just become useless? Like naruto could use the sacred gear without kurama and it doesnt seem any stronger so did he just give up access to the tailed beast chakra so kurama could talk? This seems so stupid
So has kurama just become useless? Like naruto could use the sacred gear without kurama and it doesnt seem any stronger so did he just give up access to the tailed beast chakra so kurama could talk? This seems so stupid
42/6 c13 kratos264
I feel like you just shouldve had more build up to naruto joining them, like a slow burn or something instead of this stuoid azazel capture thing as an excuse for him to not be part of this arc its really boring
I feel like you just shouldve had more build up to naruto joining them, like a slow burn or something instead of this stuoid azazel capture thing as an excuse for him to not be part of this arc its really boring
2/6 c6 kratos264
I feel like maybe this is supposed to seem cute by rias but the way youve written naruto how is he not mad at all by this, he screams at issei for bothering him and just goes with rias forcing him to do things all of sudden. Seems way ooc from the way you wrote him just a chapter prior more importantly it makes rias look terrible like its quite literally stalking and harrassing at this point and i hate that hes just giving in. You shouldve just made him into the idea right from the beginning if you were gonna make him change his mind right away
I feel like maybe this is supposed to seem cute by rias but the way youve written naruto how is he not mad at all by this, he screams at issei for bothering him and just goes with rias forcing him to do things all of sudden. Seems way ooc from the way you wrote him just a chapter prior more importantly it makes rias look terrible like its quite literally stalking and harrassing at this point and i hate that hes just giving in. You shouldve just made him into the idea right from the beginning if you were gonna make him change his mind right away