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Naruto has survived being gored through the chest before kurama would keep him alive and him
Naruto has survived being gored through the chest before kurama would keep him alive and him
6/3/2014 c5 
8Quathis
This is a good story, fun to read, though I do have one question. When will Naruto show more of what make him Naruto, or, at the least, an explanation of why? I mean, no ninjitsu, no reference to the Elemental Nations, or much like that. Ramen and the talk of hate and war. Other than that, I enjoyed reading it, and look forward to more. Koneko's actions and words around him are cool to see. Until next time.
8QuathisThis is a good story, fun to read, though I do have one question. When will Naruto show more of what make him Naruto, or, at the least, an explanation of why? I mean, no ninjitsu, no reference to the Elemental Nations, or much like that. Ramen and the talk of hate and war. Other than that, I enjoyed reading it, and look forward to more. Koneko's actions and words around him are cool to see. Until next time.
6/3/2014 c5 shadow
Please hurry and add a new chapter to your fanfiction story "Greater Than, Less Than, Inequal".
Please hurry and add a new chapter to your fanfiction story "Greater Than, Less Than, Inequal".
6/3/2014 c1 TheInformer109
Lol, "Failing son. I'm failing." That was the funniest line I've read in a while.
Lol, "Failing son. I'm failing." That was the funniest line I've read in a while.
6/3/2014 c5 a8939dhjfj
MUCHO BOOTY HOLIO! This is a good story, can't wait to see the development of the characters. Question; where'd Naruto learn how to fight? I'm assuming that this Naruto is native to this universe (despite having all signs point to him having no background here, and a scrambled desire to blend in) which is why he doesn't use any chakra (besides the Kage Bunshin, which in his words hurts him).
Does that mean he transferred there magically? Does he still have chakra and decides not to use it, or has the ability to use chakra been 'injured' someway? Curiouser and curiouser. Looking forward to the next chapter.
MUCHO BOOTY HOLIO! This is a good story, can't wait to see the development of the characters. Question; where'd Naruto learn how to fight? I'm assuming that this Naruto is native to this universe (despite having all signs point to him having no background here, and a scrambled desire to blend in) which is why he doesn't use any chakra (besides the Kage Bunshin, which in his words hurts him).
Does that mean he transferred there magically? Does he still have chakra and decides not to use it, or has the ability to use chakra been 'injured' someway? Curiouser and curiouser. Looking forward to the next chapter.
6/3/2014 c5 Guest
This rant has little to do with you, actualy nothing. The rias must marry riser nonsense always just pisses me off. cant even begain to tell you how badly, especialy because her "loving family" always sides against her. I always wonder to myself, what kind of fucked up bullshit family is more worried about their social standing then doing what they know to be right? especialy one like this one that proclaims it cares. pfft yeah they care all right.
This rant has little to do with you, actualy nothing. The rias must marry riser nonsense always just pisses me off. cant even begain to tell you how badly, especialy because her "loving family" always sides against her. I always wonder to myself, what kind of fucked up bullshit family is more worried about their social standing then doing what they know to be right? especialy one like this one that proclaims it cares. pfft yeah they care all right.
6/1/2014 c5 1Aeonir
So 40k words in and I'm still wondering why Naruto is weaker than a newly graduated genin... Are you going to get to that anytime soon or will we have to endure several 100k words worth more of painfully obvious obfuscation. Because as it stands we don't even know that this is Naruto (born in Konoha, Ninja capable of using chakra, jinchuuriki of the Kyuubi etc) or just some OC convieniently named and stylized after him that we'd have no reason to give any shits about.
1AeonirSo 40k words in and I'm still wondering why Naruto is weaker than a newly graduated genin... Are you going to get to that anytime soon or will we have to endure several 100k words worth more of painfully obvious obfuscation. Because as it stands we don't even know that this is Naruto (born in Konoha, Ninja capable of using chakra, jinchuuriki of the Kyuubi etc) or just some OC convieniently named and stylized after him that we'd have no reason to give any shits about.
6/1/2014 c5 1cj1of4
I'm hoping that Naruto will show some powers or abilities soon. If not his own, at least some demonic powers he based off his old skills.
1cj1of4I'm hoping that Naruto will show some powers or abilities soon. If not his own, at least some demonic powers he based off his old skills.
6/1/2014 c5 6wolf191000
Very Amusing chapter with some serious scenes but still a good read.
I liked how funny Naruto's day at school was and when he had his talk with Koneko it was kinda dramatic but also very intriguing. However the part where Naruto beat Issei silly still makes me laugh when I think of it.
Well next is the "Phinex Arc" and I can't wait because it's one of my favourites in the Canon.
6wolf191000Very Amusing chapter with some serious scenes but still a good read.
I liked how funny Naruto's day at school was and when he had his talk with Koneko it was kinda dramatic but also very intriguing. However the part where Naruto beat Issei silly still makes me laugh when I think of it.
Well next is the "Phinex Arc" and I can't wait because it's one of my favourites in the Canon.
6/1/2014 c5 DarkPirateKing69
just hoping that he won't degenerate into a totally spineless doormat who bows to every whim of an opposite sex.. we already have way too many protagonist of that kind around.. sure, it makes the writing easier, but also makes the story go stale fairly quick.
but that's just my opinion of course. looking forward to the next chapter regardless.. until the above mentioned happens.
just hoping that he won't degenerate into a totally spineless doormat who bows to every whim of an opposite sex.. we already have way too many protagonist of that kind around.. sure, it makes the writing easier, but also makes the story go stale fairly quick.
but that's just my opinion of course. looking forward to the next chapter regardless.. until the above mentioned happens.
6/1/2014 c5 Guest
Great chapter, update soon.
Great chapter, update soon.