
7/28/2021 c42 Guest
Ya got it!
Ya got it!
7/28/2021 c41 Guest
Personally, I think ella was the Mary Sue.
And well said, my friend, well said.
Personally, I think ella was the Mary Sue.
And well said, my friend, well said.
12/16/2018 c48 Guest
Please please please update
Please please please update
12/4/2018 c48 Guest
OH MY GOD, I SNUCK ON TO MY COMPUTER WHILE I WAS GROUNDED TO FINISH THIS! THIS IS AMAZING PLEASE WRITE MORE AND THANK YOU FOR ADDING BISEXUALITY AND PASEXUALITY INTO YOUR STORY!
OH MY GOD, I SNUCK ON TO MY COMPUTER WHILE I WAS GROUNDED TO FINISH THIS! THIS IS AMAZING PLEASE WRITE MORE AND THANK YOU FOR ADDING BISEXUALITY AND PASEXUALITY INTO YOUR STORY!
12/4/2018 c43 Guest
NNNNNNOOOOOOO IT CAN'T END IT JUST CAN"T!
NNNNNNOOOOOOO IT CAN'T END IT JUST CAN"T!
12/4/2018 c23 Guest
You are a very talented writer and I love reading your stories, I think there is a free website you may appreciate for your grammar, and if you don't those of us grammar freaks will. It's called Grammarly it's really good, think about it.
~Hailey
You are a very talented writer and I love reading your stories, I think there is a free website you may appreciate for your grammar, and if you don't those of us grammar freaks will. It's called Grammarly it's really good, think about it.
~Hailey
12/4/2018 c3 Guest
Omg, I love it already this is so amazing! 10 out of 10
Omg, I love it already this is so amazing! 10 out of 10
10/27/2018 c48
16QuestionableIntentions
lovely chapter.
no promises on the eating thing, though ;)
love ya!
baz

lovely chapter.
no promises on the eating thing, though ;)
love ya!
baz
10/26/2018 c48
10Writing Desk's Raven
YOU’RE BACK! This makes me happy, I can’t wait for the rest of the story when you get around to it!

YOU’RE BACK! This makes me happy, I can’t wait for the rest of the story when you get around to it!
4/3/2018 c47
16QuestionableIntentions
yesssssssss.
i'm so excited for when she tells jeb. i fricking love this story. you're amazing.
love,
baz

yesssssssss.
i'm so excited for when she tells jeb. i fricking love this story. you're amazing.
love,
baz
3/19/2018 c46
1xkurakurax
i’m glad she’s leaving, jeb really seems to be trying to change, and srsly? sasuke? -side-eyes-

i’m glad she’s leaving, jeb really seems to be trying to change, and srsly? sasuke? -side-eyes-
3/18/2018 c41 xkurakurax
i barely saw any whining from max. if anything, i think she’s her own things just as if she would in the book (imo, anyway). i got way more annoyed at how much of a selfish idiot ella was being. i immediately thought, “but wait a minute, you acting like yer mom isn’t max’s mom as well. and why should she have to fix a relationship between you and yer dad when he treated her badly compared to you like yer dumbass is saying, tf.” i ranted so much about her, lol. max has her coping methods, ella should come with her own. she’s being a leech.
i barely saw any whining from max. if anything, i think she’s her own things just as if she would in the book (imo, anyway). i got way more annoyed at how much of a selfish idiot ella was being. i immediately thought, “but wait a minute, you acting like yer mom isn’t max’s mom as well. and why should she have to fix a relationship between you and yer dad when he treated her badly compared to you like yer dumbass is saying, tf.” i ranted so much about her, lol. max has her coping methods, ella should come with her own. she’s being a leech.