for Ten Piece10/17/2016 c2 Guest
This story is okay, but it doesn't seem like Luffy and his crew are doing that much fighting, it doesn't look like they are as important as they actually are. Can you kind of equal out the amount of fighting between all of them because that would be good. At this rate, people would think Ben was in charge or something, I'm not a person who likes that type of senecio. Can you please make the Straw Hat Pirates more included pleas though, but other then that your story is good, keep up the good work.
This story is okay, but it doesn't seem like Luffy and his crew are doing that much fighting, it doesn't look like they are as important as they actually are. Can you kind of equal out the amount of fighting between all of them because that would be good. At this rate, people would think Ben was in charge or something, I'm not a person who likes that type of senecio. Can you please make the Straw Hat Pirates more included pleas though, but other then that your story is good, keep up the good work.
9/10/2016 c1 Guest
If you're not continuing, just drop this worthless piece of shit.
If you're not continuing, just drop this worthless piece of shit.
1/29/2016 c2 Guest
So will you continue this story or what?
So will you continue this story or what?
1/18/2016 c2 
4Watch Seeker
Nice chapter! Oh, and by the way, I wonder if Ben get his first bounty about...eight or nine hundred million. What will government think if they figure out Ben's unbelievable powers...heh heh(evil grin)
P.S when are you going to write the next one?!
4Watch SeekerNice chapter! Oh, and by the way, I wonder if Ben get his first bounty about...eight or nine hundred million. What will government think if they figure out Ben's unbelievable powers...heh heh(evil grin)
P.S when are you going to write the next one?!
11/24/2015 c4 Guest
Please write the next chapter
Please write the next chapter
10/8/2015 c3 Watch Seeker
hi! I have read this story at least 10 times per one day! And, if it's ok to you, would you hear about my idea of this story? Well, since Chopper doesn't believe human anymore except two docters; Dr. Hiruruk(Is this spell right? Never mind.), and Dr. Kureha, how about Ben make him trust the others by changing himself into Ditto? According to Ben in Omniverse ver, he mentioned that Ditto is his cutest alien. So, Ditto is the cutest in Ben 10, and Chopper is the cutest in One Piece(My opinion, of course), it'll be ok of the match of them! Actually, Ditto might be the same size as Chopper, and it'll be easy to talk to Chopper. ...OK, too much talk. I really, reeeeally want to see this match! Please, make Chopper meet Ditto, please?!
hi! I have read this story at least 10 times per one day! And, if it's ok to you, would you hear about my idea of this story? Well, since Chopper doesn't believe human anymore except two docters; Dr. Hiruruk(Is this spell right? Never mind.), and Dr. Kureha, how about Ben make him trust the others by changing himself into Ditto? According to Ben in Omniverse ver, he mentioned that Ditto is his cutest alien. So, Ditto is the cutest in Ben 10, and Chopper is the cutest in One Piece(My opinion, of course), it'll be ok of the match of them! Actually, Ditto might be the same size as Chopper, and it'll be easy to talk to Chopper. ...OK, too much talk. I really, reeeeally want to see this match! Please, make Chopper meet Ditto, please?!
10/2/2015 c4 Watch Seeker
ok... so when are you supposed to continue this story? If you're not dead, please answer us. I start to feel worry about you... please, I want to see this more. You uploaded this two days before my birthday, and you didn't continue the story for almost a year and a month? Please, come back. PLEASE
ok... so when are you supposed to continue this story? If you're not dead, please answer us. I start to feel worry about you... please, I want to see this more. You uploaded this two days before my birthday, and you didn't continue the story for almost a year and a month? Please, come back. PLEASE
9/19/2015 c4 7Myra the Dovahkiin
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
I do hope the Mermaid Princess falls in love with Ben. Also can you add the other Ultimate Aliens & Omniverse aliens for the Ultimatrix (for those they have to scan, have them either appear in the one piece world or have Azmuth somehow get a hold of their DNA).
Can you have the episode where Zs'Skayr, Dr. Victor, Crujo, and Kuphulu revive/team up with Lord Transyl & Ben scans Lord Transyl's DNA happen in the One Piece world (it can happen in Thriller Bark since it slightly resembles their planet)
7Myra the Dovahkiingreat story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
I do hope the Mermaid Princess falls in love with Ben. Also can you add the other Ultimate Aliens & Omniverse aliens for the Ultimatrix (for those they have to scan, have them either appear in the one piece world or have Azmuth somehow get a hold of their DNA).
Can you have the episode where Zs'Skayr, Dr. Victor, Crujo, and Kuphulu revive/team up with Lord Transyl & Ben scans Lord Transyl's DNA happen in the One Piece world (it can happen in Thriller Bark since it slightly resembles their planet)
8/30/2015 c4 1PrimordialTitan
I like the sound of your idea for the fishman island arc, looking forward to the next installment
1PrimordialTitanI like the sound of your idea for the fishman island arc, looking forward to the next installment
7/30/2015 c4 Guest
Please continue is story
Please continue is story
8/1/2015 c4 OmniNinja
I like this story it draws you in. I would like to know when the next chapter will be updated.
I like this story it draws you in. I would like to know when the next chapter will be updated.