
11/2/2024 c10 Guest
If it is just Naruto and Hinata this pretty much canon. Unless hinata births 2 sons or 2 daughters instead of one son and one daughter.
If it is just Naruto and Hinata this pretty much canon. Unless hinata births 2 sons or 2 daughters instead of one son and one daughter.
6/5/2024 c10 XxuserXx
Welcome back! Glad you’ve gotten back into writing and hope to see future updates, you’re naruhina stories are my favorite!
And for ideas I’d love to read another one of your menmahina stories. Those two are crazy so any AU with them is always entertaining
Welcome back! Glad you’ve gotten back into writing and hope to see future updates, you’re naruhina stories are my favorite!
And for ideas I’d love to read another one of your menmahina stories. Those two are crazy so any AU with them is always entertaining
6/4/2024 c10 Da besta OrC
Interesting one-shots. I am not a fan of furries or modern day AUs. I like it when they stay close to the original source material. That being said I do like your writing style and the other chapters. And I have a suggestion for a new one-shot. Depending on how fleshed out and we’ll it is received maybe even a two-shot.
How about a story where Naruto and Hinata are on different sides of the fence. The fence being the 3rd Shinobi world war that started with the destruction of the Uzumaki clan, by Suna, Kumo, Kiri and Iwa.
I would give them the odds to win by not only suppressing chakra with their chains, but also absorb chakra and vitality through them. Keeping any Uzumaki in battle indefinitely. When the Uzumaki emerge victorious against the other 4 great villages that will have a detrimental effect on their relationship with Konoha, since the Uzumaki now became even more powerful and a threat, because Konoha didn’t aid them and let Suna and Kumo march through the land of fire. Completely uncontested. So Konoha would sent their own forces to aid and reinforce the remaining shinobi of the four nations. One of which would have an adult Hinata deployed to fight there.
History repeats itself and the Uzumaki win again, but this time they use a massive barrier along the coast to keep their enemies on water. And with no escape and dwindling chakra they will be easy pickings. Desperate to survive Hinata pleads with Naruto for her survival after she sees him dispatch the 3rd Hokage, Danzo, Koharu, Homura, Jiraya, Orochimaru, Tsunade, etc.
He restrains her and takes her to the Uzukage. Kushina Uzumaki allows Hinata to live if she conceives at least 9 children with Naruto. Kushina wants the Byakugan for her village ( and a lot of grandchildren to spoil). Hinata doesn’t have the caged bird seal so she would be able to provide that.
Hinata would agree, but struggle because after a few pregnancies the risk for her and her children grows. Naruto and Kushina who grow to love and respect Hinata over the years create a method to give her some of the vitality the Uzumaki possess. Exactly like Karin’s chakra restoration works. But in this case it enhances her chakra and vitality. Naruto tells the weakening Hinata to bite him and with some reluctance she complies. Once she did this though, her body grows addicted to Narutos chakra and being connected to his chakra network makes her believe that the Uzumaki are gods. From there on she becomes a fanatically loyal woman that does whatever Naruto pleases. As long as she gets a bite of him, sometimes.
The other villages get wiped off the map. Naruto follows in her mothers footsteps and becomes Uzukage gets the woman, and the Uzumaki repopulate the elemental nations.
If you think that this could be a good story please do so.
Interesting one-shots. I am not a fan of furries or modern day AUs. I like it when they stay close to the original source material. That being said I do like your writing style and the other chapters. And I have a suggestion for a new one-shot. Depending on how fleshed out and we’ll it is received maybe even a two-shot.
How about a story where Naruto and Hinata are on different sides of the fence. The fence being the 3rd Shinobi world war that started with the destruction of the Uzumaki clan, by Suna, Kumo, Kiri and Iwa.
I would give them the odds to win by not only suppressing chakra with their chains, but also absorb chakra and vitality through them. Keeping any Uzumaki in battle indefinitely. When the Uzumaki emerge victorious against the other 4 great villages that will have a detrimental effect on their relationship with Konoha, since the Uzumaki now became even more powerful and a threat, because Konoha didn’t aid them and let Suna and Kumo march through the land of fire. Completely uncontested. So Konoha would sent their own forces to aid and reinforce the remaining shinobi of the four nations. One of which would have an adult Hinata deployed to fight there.
History repeats itself and the Uzumaki win again, but this time they use a massive barrier along the coast to keep their enemies on water. And with no escape and dwindling chakra they will be easy pickings. Desperate to survive Hinata pleads with Naruto for her survival after she sees him dispatch the 3rd Hokage, Danzo, Koharu, Homura, Jiraya, Orochimaru, Tsunade, etc.
He restrains her and takes her to the Uzukage. Kushina Uzumaki allows Hinata to live if she conceives at least 9 children with Naruto. Kushina wants the Byakugan for her village ( and a lot of grandchildren to spoil). Hinata doesn’t have the caged bird seal so she would be able to provide that.
Hinata would agree, but struggle because after a few pregnancies the risk for her and her children grows. Naruto and Kushina who grow to love and respect Hinata over the years create a method to give her some of the vitality the Uzumaki possess. Exactly like Karin’s chakra restoration works. But in this case it enhances her chakra and vitality. Naruto tells the weakening Hinata to bite him and with some reluctance she complies. Once she did this though, her body grows addicted to Narutos chakra and being connected to his chakra network makes her believe that the Uzumaki are gods. From there on she becomes a fanatically loyal woman that does whatever Naruto pleases. As long as she gets a bite of him, sometimes.
The other villages get wiped off the map. Naruto follows in her mothers footsteps and becomes Uzukage gets the woman, and the Uzumaki repopulate the elemental nations.
If you think that this could be a good story please do so.
6/3/2024 c10 Rosedove
A new chapter! Wow! You really are back. How about a part 2 of the “Special Friend” one, that’s my favorite... or a divorced/break up but get back together. I guess im a hopeless romantic when it comes to Naruhina lol
A new chapter! Wow! You really are back. How about a part 2 of the “Special Friend” one, that’s my favorite... or a divorced/break up but get back together. I guess im a hopeless romantic when it comes to Naruhina lol
6/3/2024 c10
3knowall7
Great to see you give us a fantastic oneshot! I enjoy dom!Naruto and sub!Hinata. Can you write a sorta sequel where the two engage in some sweet aftercare. Them cooling down, complimenting one another as the hormones drop, Naruto taking care of her.
Again, great work

Great to see you give us a fantastic oneshot! I enjoy dom!Naruto and sub!Hinata. Can you write a sorta sequel where the two engage in some sweet aftercare. Them cooling down, complimenting one another as the hormones drop, Naruto taking care of her.
Again, great work
6/3/2024 c10 Guest
Can you please make a chapter about a milf Hinata and a shota Naruto. where Naruto is a poor orphan boy and Hinata adopts him and the two become a little too close. Please and thank you.
Can you please make a chapter about a milf Hinata and a shota Naruto. where Naruto is a poor orphan boy and Hinata adopts him and the two become a little too close. Please and thank you.
6/3/2024 c10
11nightwind83
nice new one, id love to see a cursed hinata with natuto needing to calm her

nice new one, id love to see a cursed hinata with natuto needing to calm her
6/3/2024 c10
1TheWateringWizard
Love the update ! You’re the writer behind Flirtacious Feline right ? I hope you want to continue this story, I love it !
Good to have you back, take care of yourself !

Love the update ! You’re the writer behind Flirtacious Feline right ? I hope you want to continue this story, I love it !
Good to have you back, take care of yourself !
6/3/2024 c10
11prince of underbrush
well dang, Jiraya has finally gotten through to the boy~
fantastic chapter to make a comeback.

well dang, Jiraya has finally gotten through to the boy~
fantastic chapter to make a comeback.
6/3/2024 c10
22Yami Luna Kitsune
pretty great chapter
despite there being a couple of errors, this is still pretty great
if you are going to add more chapters, then it should not be marked as 'complete'

pretty great chapter
despite there being a couple of errors, this is still pretty great
if you are going to add more chapters, then it should not be marked as 'complete'
5/21/2021 c2 Guest
i love this ove especially good luck and continue writing with lov efrom your silent reader here
i love this ove especially good luck and continue writing with lov efrom your silent reader here