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6/10/2019 c14 reyesrachel805
Cuando actualizarias o hasta aqui llega?
7/28/2018 c14 serryblack1
Yes can jake be the father or chris
11/9/2017 c8 10fandomenforcer
I can't help but bust up laughing at the end here.
8/18/2017 c1 Guest
The grammar is awful. Words are in the wrong place and the sentences don't make sense other than that it's a good story
6/14/2017 c14 22Slytherin Studios
I knew lily was crazy but not that crazy, please update soon.
6/14/2017 c13 god of all
Great chapter and and story so far please continue this story soon.
6/13/2017 c13 Slytherin Studios
nicely done, please update soon.
12/21/2016 c1 KyuuKyuu666
Please find a beta. I love the idea of this story, but its a headache to read
7/8/2016 c12 Deathknightguthix
Hmm... The story was good but it was kinda hard to decipher. If I were you I'd put out a request for a beta to grammar check your work. One requirement of this beta must be that they are fluent in English. And if I have made a grave mistake in assuming that English is not your first language I apologize but quite frankly I haven't had that hard of a time deciphering a story in a veeeeeeery long time.
6/15/2016 c12 Slytherin Studios
nicely done.
6/15/2016 c11 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
6/15/2016 c3 Mountain-Tenshi
You really need to work on the spelling because I love the story line but half the time I have no idea what it is trying to say. So I would suggest getting a beta reader. Because at some point people will get annoyed and stop reading..
And for pairing? Lara/Jake/Leon/Luis/Carlos. I don't like femslash so I don't think Ada should be in the pairing.
6/15/2016 c1 9Morgan d'Arc
I like the plot but the spelling and grammar is a major turn off for me. Perhaps you should find a beta reader?
6/14/2016 c11 22Slytherin Studios
I like it, please update soon.
5/5/2016 c10 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
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