for Betrayal of Friends1/2/2014 c5 sighnatsume
Yay! I'm so happy that you update very fast unlike me :P and I can't wait for the next chapter :D
This chapter is great! btw It was like Mikan became the human version of tag of war...hahaha
Yay! I'm so happy that you update very fast unlike me :P and I can't wait for the next chapter :D
This chapter is great! btw It was like Mikan became the human version of tag of war...hahaha
1/2/2014 c5 
1BubblesDoujinshi
WHYTHATFUCKINGSLUTOFABITCH!ILLKILLTHATFUCKINGWORMLUNA!GOTOHELLASSHOLE! ()
1BubblesDoujinshiWHYTHATFUCKINGSLUTOFABITCH!ILLKILLTHATFUCKINGWORMLUNA!GOTOHELLASSHOLE! ()
1/2/2014 c5 5xXTo-TheBeautiful-SeraphimXx
KYAAA! this chapter is the BEST.. ) and why's natsume jealous? Isn't he under luna's alice? Im confused. Hmm.. btw I really like how zero protect her hahaha! Nice one and I hope.. please, dont let luna use her alice on her im begging u. Anyways, keep updating soon and good luck ::)))))
5xXTo-TheBeautiful-SeraphimXxKYAAA! this chapter is the BEST.. ) and why's natsume jealous? Isn't he under luna's alice? Im confused. Hmm.. btw I really like how zero protect her hahaha! Nice one and I hope.. please, dont let luna use her alice on her im begging u. Anyways, keep updating soon and good luck ::)))))
1/2/2014 c5 2Kipla
Btw, previous reveiw was meant to be for hap 5 but my comp bugged out and went to chap 1 when I was tyoing and didn't notice
2KiplaBtw, previous reveiw was meant to be for hap 5 but my comp bugged out and went to chap 1 when I was tyoing and didn't notice
1/2/2014 c1 Kipla
YEEEEESS! Natsume totally deserved that punch! Aha! Also Mikan is so cute :o And can Ruka get anymore rude? Like seriously! CHILL OUT RUKA!
Another great chapter for a great writer! :3 Also english is my weakest point but I'm pretty sure there were near to 0 mistakes other than the occasional missing letter! Good job and gambatte!
Heehee! I always say too much XD
Byebye
Oh and thanks for the message back it made me super happy! Makes me want to reveiw people alot more :D
Seriously, bye now.
YEEEEESS! Natsume totally deserved that punch! Aha! Also Mikan is so cute :o And can Ruka get anymore rude? Like seriously! CHILL OUT RUKA!
Another great chapter for a great writer! :3 Also english is my weakest point but I'm pretty sure there were near to 0 mistakes other than the occasional missing letter! Good job and gambatte!
Heehee! I always say too much XD
Byebye
Oh and thanks for the message back it made me super happy! Makes me want to reveiw people alot more :D
Seriously, bye now.
1/1/2014 c4 5xXTo-TheBeautiful-SeraphimXx
Wow nice choice, kiryuu zero is handsome and pls let mikan get revenge on her jerk friends and luna, well let the bitch suffer and double it! MWAHAHAHA! well this is nice chapter, im getting excited :))) keep up the good work
5xXTo-TheBeautiful-SeraphimXxWow nice choice, kiryuu zero is handsome and pls let mikan get revenge on her jerk friends and luna, well let the bitch suffer and double it! MWAHAHAHA! well this is nice chapter, im getting excited :))) keep up the good work
1/1/2014 c3 2Kipla
This story makes me want to cry! It's so sad... Mikan I'll be your friend! And are you making it that Luna is using her alice to control Natsume, Ruke etc... ? Either way I want Mikan to beat them all up! It's really good! And sorry for your loss may your friend's brother rest in peace and I'm sure he was a good person.
Great story, Great Updating!
See ya
Xxx
2KiplaThis story makes me want to cry! It's so sad... Mikan I'll be your friend! And are you making it that Luna is using her alice to control Natsume, Ruke etc... ? Either way I want Mikan to beat them all up! It's really good! And sorry for your loss may your friend's brother rest in peace and I'm sure he was a good person.
Great story, Great Updating!
See ya
Xxx
1/1/2014 c2 5xXTo-TheBeautiful-SeraphimXx
Pls update soon. Poor mikan, curse them specially that bitch luna the slut koizumi, I really hate her, anyways pls update very soon
5xXTo-TheBeautiful-SeraphimXxPls update soon. Poor mikan, curse them specially that bitch luna the slut koizumi, I really hate her, anyways pls update very soon