for Betrayal of Friends9/2/2015 c21 MarshJ-sans sist
I like this story and I think you should do what you feel most comfortable with and if that's restarting the story then go ahead :) You never know, you might get some more and better ideas too :) Though I do think it would be good to rewrite the previous chapters first then post them not all at once but not too far apart so people don't have to wait for something they've already read if you keep the ideas of the chapters the same
I like this story and I think you should do what you feel most comfortable with and if that's restarting the story then go ahead :) You never know, you might get some more and better ideas too :) Though I do think it would be good to rewrite the previous chapters first then post them not all at once but not too far apart so people don't have to wait for something they've already read if you keep the ideas of the chapters the same
7/26/2015 c20 I love anime
Hurry up and publish more! I waiting for it!
Hurry up and publish more! I waiting for it!
7/17/2015 c20 Dana frost
I'm sorry but your story was so good that I just wanted to go on with the story with out reviewing hehe!
Where I am it's winter and it's cooled I'm from ballarat in vic lol
I wish it was summer here and I'm sorry to here about all that I hope you soon feel better soon
As always I will be waiting
From Dana frost
I'm sorry but your story was so good that I just wanted to go on with the story with out reviewing hehe!
Where I am it's winter and it's cooled I'm from ballarat in vic lol
I wish it was summer here and I'm sorry to here about all that I hope you soon feel better soon
As always I will be waiting
From Dana frost
7/3/2015 c20 
1YourAverageGem
My summer has been very enjoyable, thank you~ We need to talk more though! Anyway good chapter as usual and take your time. AND NUUUU DONT DIE
1YourAverageGemMy summer has been very enjoyable, thank you~ We need to talk more though! Anyway good chapter as usual and take your time. AND NUUUU DONT DIE
7/3/2015 c20 1RavenAcA3
Oooo secret revealed! Dang! So many good things to think about! Like Youichi! Then the reason of the betrayal, then Natsume, and the results of Mikan being sick and who will find out! Oh! I cant wait! Thank you for updating! I cant freakn waait! XD
1RavenAcA3Oooo secret revealed! Dang! So many good things to think about! Like Youichi! Then the reason of the betrayal, then Natsume, and the results of Mikan being sick and who will find out! Oh! I cant wait! Thank you for updating! I cant freakn waait! XD
7/2/2015 c14 RavenAcA3
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUUUUCH! (CH14) imma continue reading now! Thank you for finally updating and a fantatsic storyline! XD
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUUUUCH! (CH14) imma continue reading now! Thank you for finally updating and a fantatsic storyline! XD
7/2/2015 c20 31Wendy402
I'm so sorry to hear that your uncle passed away, and that your aunt collapsed. I hope she recovers soon. Well a positive way to think about it is that your uncle probably went to a better place; no pain, no sorrow, no negative things that we, the living, have. If you want someone to talk to, feel free to PM me :)
AAAAAnyways...LOVE THE CHAPTER. Ahhh Hotaru must be really hurt, hearing Zero say those things to her. Well, it WAS her fault. I wish this problem clears up soon and all. I also wonder what happened to Mikan. I mean, just 3 alice stones wouldn't make her feel THAT sick, right? Or am I just thinking too much?
Thanks for updating, but please update soon! :D:D
31Wendy402I'm so sorry to hear that your uncle passed away, and that your aunt collapsed. I hope she recovers soon. Well a positive way to think about it is that your uncle probably went to a better place; no pain, no sorrow, no negative things that we, the living, have. If you want someone to talk to, feel free to PM me :)
AAAAAnyways...LOVE THE CHAPTER. Ahhh Hotaru must be really hurt, hearing Zero say those things to her. Well, it WAS her fault. I wish this problem clears up soon and all. I also wonder what happened to Mikan. I mean, just 3 alice stones wouldn't make her feel THAT sick, right? Or am I just thinking too much?
Thanks for updating, but please update soon! :D:D
7/1/2015 c20 4chewybillabong
For some reason I really ship Mikan with Zero ... PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
4chewybillabongFor some reason I really ship Mikan with Zero ... PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
7/1/2015 c20 Guest
Please update again ! Really love this fic so please continue
P.S. really so for your uncle
Please update again ! Really love this fic so please continue
P.S. really so for your uncle
7/1/2015 c20 2Sparklybutterflies1
I'm not wondering who's going to find mikan passed out on the floor. You're a good writer.
2Sparklybutterflies1I'm not wondering who's going to find mikan passed out on the floor. You're a good writer.