for Betrayal of Friends4/24/2015 c19 erza
please continue this i really love it
please continue this i really love it
4/7/2015 c19 Okamigamergirl
Don't worry about your spelling to much I love the story and plot and please update soon
Don't worry about your spelling to much I love the story and plot and please update soon
3/13/2015 c19 Guest
Are you not updating cause you died or something?
Are you not updating cause you died or something?
2/16/2015 c19 Guest
Please update. I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story. It sucks when people ditch their own stories and tell the readers to come up with their own ending.
Please update. I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story. It sucks when people ditch their own stories and tell the readers to come up with their own ending.
2/14/2015 c19 Yuri Reikumi
PLEASE UPDATE
PLEASE UPDATE
21/23/2015 c19 Ama Zon
Do NOT give up on this story.
Do NOT give up on this story.
1/19/2015 c19 StarElsie
Woah! Zero is Youichi's dead brother! This is cool! (I am StarElsie but I couldn't log in and post a review because it says that I already reviewed for this chapter. I think I already reviewed for this chapter because this chapter used to be a author's note or something).
Woah! Zero is Youichi's dead brother! This is cool! (I am StarElsie but I couldn't log in and post a review because it says that I already reviewed for this chapter. I think I already reviewed for this chapter because this chapter used to be a author's note or something).
1/14/2015 c18 Lunaiire
You said you would update soon...almost two months later and STILL no update. I'm dying here wanting more of my favorite story, do you enjoy watching me be tortured?! TTTT
You said you would update soon...almost two months later and STILL no update. I'm dying here wanting more of my favorite story, do you enjoy watching me be tortured?! TTTT
1/3/2015 c18 Guest
Didn't you say that you'd update soon?! HURRY UP!
Didn't you say that you'd update soon?! HURRY UP!
12/19/2014 c18 Guest
If you're gonna update soon, then hurry up!
If you're gonna update soon, then hurry up!
12/11/2014 c4 DarkDevil
The story line is taking an interesting turn, but I would suggest you to double, triple, check all these errors. It's annoying the hell out of me.
I don't want to come out blunt, but damnit, if you're publishing this story, might as give it your best.
I understand that your life may be less than ideal, and I respect that. However, a lot of people won't, they just WON'T care about that. What they want is the overall product.
It would help if you read others' fanfictions. The good ones.
Apologies for my bluntness.
The story line is taking an interesting turn, but I would suggest you to double, triple, check all these errors. It's annoying the hell out of me.
I don't want to come out blunt, but damnit, if you're publishing this story, might as give it your best.
I understand that your life may be less than ideal, and I respect that. However, a lot of people won't, they just WON'T care about that. What they want is the overall product.
It would help if you read others' fanfictions. The good ones.
Apologies for my bluntness.
12/8/2014 c18 Guest
Can you update yet? ! You better not quit writing this!
Can you update yet? ! You better not quit writing this!