for One of the Four12/15/2020 c3 arcra
Noo! I need to know what happens next! Dear God, I don't want them to die. I hope that they'll be miraculously saved just like in the HG books.
Noo! I need to know what happens next! Dear God, I don't want them to die. I hope that they'll be miraculously saved just like in the HG books.
7/2/2014 c3 
4truthed
Great chapter! I really like this fic despite not knowing much about the characters. Sherlock's face when Mycroft walked in was priceless! This is going really well. I can't wait to see what they all act like in the arena. Do you think that Sally, John, and Anderson will be allies in the arena?
4truthedGreat chapter! I really like this fic despite not knowing much about the characters. Sherlock's face when Mycroft walked in was priceless! This is going really well. I can't wait to see what they all act like in the arena. Do you think that Sally, John, and Anderson will be allies in the arena?
2/25/2014 c2 Guest
I absolutly love this! Please update soon!
I absolutly love this! Please update soon!
2/15/2014 c2 4truthed
Ooh, this was a fun chapter. Sylvia Anderson seems so creepy- right now I'm thinking of him as like Snape when he was young. You know, the stringy hair, sallow face, stuff like that.
One question- I'm wondering why you chose all of district six to be druggies. I would think that only the victors would have the money and the need, but the way you're saying it is that the government is drugging them. Just wondering why.
Sorry if this review is hard to understand. Just ask and I'll fix it. :D
4truthedOoh, this was a fun chapter. Sylvia Anderson seems so creepy- right now I'm thinking of him as like Snape when he was young. You know, the stringy hair, sallow face, stuff like that.
One question- I'm wondering why you chose all of district six to be druggies. I would think that only the victors would have the money and the need, but the way you're saying it is that the government is drugging them. Just wondering why.
Sorry if this review is hard to understand. Just ask and I'll fix it. :D
2/15/2014 c2 3ThouArtPenguin
Yay! You're back! :D
I liked this chapter! I just want to know why Anderson's name is Sylvia? XD I was laughing so hard at that one! I want to know where you got that idea cause it was brilliant! And I thought that Mrs. Hudson asking if anyone wants tea was perfect! Good ol' Mrs. Hudson in a Hunger Games universe!
Also, I thought Careers were Districts 1, 2 and 4, not just certain people in them? Just a bit confused on that one. I have not read the books for a few years, so I don't remember much.
Anyway, glad you updated! Keep it up! :)
3ThouArtPenguinYay! You're back! :D
I liked this chapter! I just want to know why Anderson's name is Sylvia? XD I was laughing so hard at that one! I want to know where you got that idea cause it was brilliant! And I thought that Mrs. Hudson asking if anyone wants tea was perfect! Good ol' Mrs. Hudson in a Hunger Games universe!
Also, I thought Careers were Districts 1, 2 and 4, not just certain people in them? Just a bit confused on that one. I have not read the books for a few years, so I don't remember much.
Anyway, glad you updated! Keep it up! :)
1/1/2014 c1 4truthed
I've never seen an episode of Sherlock, but this story is great anyway! I especially like the line where you said that Violet Hunter had extra punctuation to spare. She's so fluffy and cheerful (in a good way) that she could be Effie's daughter! I'm not quite sure about your meaning for John 'shaking his head generically', but otherwise it was pretty clear. Sooo I wonder what happened to Katniss?
4truthedI've never seen an episode of Sherlock, but this story is great anyway! I especially like the line where you said that Violet Hunter had extra punctuation to spare. She's so fluffy and cheerful (in a good way) that she could be Effie's daughter! I'm not quite sure about your meaning for John 'shaking his head generically', but otherwise it was pretty clear. Sooo I wonder what happened to Katniss?
12/31/2013 c1 3ThouArtPenguin
I really like this! I like how you described it as a "slaughterhouse corral". That was perfect!
The whole awkward moment on the train was in character, too! (At least for John and Molly. Obviously I don't know Carrie that well yet XD)
Violet sort of annoys me, but in a good way! She kinda reminds me of a more annoying version of Effie Trinket.
The fact that there's an extra person from each District is so cool! I mean, four winners? That's awesome! :D And even more deaths is pretty cool XD
Keep going! :)
3ThouArtPenguinI really like this! I like how you described it as a "slaughterhouse corral". That was perfect!
The whole awkward moment on the train was in character, too! (At least for John and Molly. Obviously I don't know Carrie that well yet XD)
Violet sort of annoys me, but in a good way! She kinda reminds me of a more annoying version of Effie Trinket.
The fact that there's an extra person from each District is so cool! I mean, four winners? That's awesome! :D And even more deaths is pretty cool XD
Keep going! :)