
8/8/2019 c33
1fridarix07
I know this story is pretty old, but my stomach hurts from the bad ending.. #JusticeForCanada Beautifully written though!

I know this story is pretty old, but my stomach hurts from the bad ending.. #JusticeForCanada Beautifully written though!
8/23/2016 c31 jeejee12
continuing to read! I Need the next chapter!
continuing to read! I Need the next chapter!
5/24/2016 c29 Guest
This is a great story, and it deserves to be updated! I know it's been about a month, but I keep coming back to this story hoping for an update. Keep up the great work, you winderful person!
This is a great story, and it deserves to be updated! I know it's been about a month, but I keep coming back to this story hoping for an update. Keep up the great work, you winderful person!
3/11/2016 c21 Redhybrid
happens to me all the time the doors slamming on me its bad at night were its dark and quiet and my anxiety is at full tilt then my god damm door slamms and scares the hell out of me i had ran all the way to the bathroom shut the door and locked it.
happens to me all the time the doors slamming on me its bad at night were its dark and quiet and my anxiety is at full tilt then my god damm door slamms and scares the hell out of me i had ran all the way to the bathroom shut the door and locked it.
2/10/2016 c28
9jeejee12
Poor Kuma! :( And woah France threatening Alfred. xD Anyhoo, Can you put a bold title on the side whenever you switch points of views or when you're going to a different set? So, it lets people know you're going back to certain parts of the story. Example: *Back with Canada* Great story can't wait to see what happens! May Kuma make it through and Ivan and Mattie be happy together. :)

Poor Kuma! :( And woah France threatening Alfred. xD Anyhoo, Can you put a bold title on the side whenever you switch points of views or when you're going to a different set? So, it lets people know you're going back to certain parts of the story. Example: *Back with Canada* Great story can't wait to see what happens! May Kuma make it through and Ivan and Mattie be happy together. :)
12/18/2015 c1 Jordan Banana Phant
The only grammar mistake in saw was "price" instead of "piece." Other than that, this is a written fanfiction! I'm enjoying the way you're writing the characters, it's very good! Thanks for writing this!
The only grammar mistake in saw was "price" instead of "piece." Other than that, this is a written fanfiction! I'm enjoying the way you're writing the characters, it's very good! Thanks for writing this!
4/23/2015 c25 Lily
Please Wright more I'm during to k now what happens a next
I LOVE THE 2ps
I've seen a lot of 2p Italy and Canada but I LOVE how you're doing it
Please Wright more I'm during to k now what happens a next
I LOVE THE 2ps
I've seen a lot of 2p Italy and Canada but I LOVE how you're doing it
2/13/2015 c4
53russianwinter013
This is a good story, but you seriously need a beta for the grammar and spelling mistakes. I'm not being mean; it's true. There are some parts that need to be rewritten and some parts moved too fast, but otherwise this is good.

This is a good story, but you seriously need a beta for the grammar and spelling mistakes. I'm not being mean; it's true. There are some parts that need to be rewritten and some parts moved too fast, but otherwise this is good.
11/24/2014 c24 jeejee12
;A; nooo Kumajirou! Don't hurt him! and Awww IvanxMattie moment 3
;A; nooo Kumajirou! Don't hurt him! and Awww IvanxMattie moment 3
9/28/2014 c23 Transformers' BABY
France is always ok with a relationship he is the country of love hope they find kumajirou
France is always ok with a relationship he is the country of love hope they find kumajirou