for Junior Prom10/14/2021 c1 Isabele
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1/30/2017 c1 Guest
ok that is just way too sad, so obviously it was well written
ok that is just way too sad, so obviously it was well written
1/23/2016 c1 Guest
That's just too sad ... but I like that you made Warren a good guy who didn't just dump his girl.
That's just too sad ... but I like that you made Warren a good guy who didn't just dump his girl.
4/6/2015 c1 Jiaokai
awww how tragic :( Layla and Warren were always my otp...The story was good...The only problem I thought the story had was when Layla was saying "That you are going to be inside of her tonight". I don't think that is something Layla would say...it seems out of character, and a bit to graphic for her dialogue. But other than than the story was great, I could feel her nervousness :) keep writing.
awww how tragic :( Layla and Warren were always my otp...The story was good...The only problem I thought the story had was when Layla was saying "That you are going to be inside of her tonight". I don't think that is something Layla would say...it seems out of character, and a bit to graphic for her dialogue. But other than than the story was great, I could feel her nervousness :) keep writing.
4/27/2014 c1 Guest
I love this story so much.
I love this story so much.
2/10/2014 c1 
2serenity2293
Awesome story! Wish it was longer because its been a while since a story could mak me actually FEEL the heartbreak. Hope I get to read more from you!
2serenity2293Awesome story! Wish it was longer because its been a while since a story could mak me actually FEEL the heartbreak. Hope I get to read more from you!