for Beyond The Sunset8/6/2014 c1 rndomfan
A beautiful story! Short and sweet w I'm starting to like kibahina more and more!
A beautiful story! Short and sweet w I'm starting to like kibahina more and more!
6/21/2014 c1 TinyPiecesOfMyHeart
Amazing & fantastic & wonderful. Even though it was a cliched concept,(i read many KibaHina of these sorts, Naruto rejects her - Kiba comforts her - Hinata realize what's been in front of her the whole time and falls in love with Kiba -) you still let something special through to make it stand out. I just can't put my finger on it, no matter how I think about it.(sorry)
Amazing & fantastic & wonderful. Even though it was a cliched concept,(i read many KibaHina of these sorts, Naruto rejects her - Kiba comforts her - Hinata realize what's been in front of her the whole time and falls in love with Kiba -) you still let something special through to make it stand out. I just can't put my finger on it, no matter how I think about it.(sorry)
4/18/2014 c1 
30Juri.DP
There is a...weird picture next to my review box.
Anyhoo, look at me, all late on the scene! This fic definitely feels like 'In another universe' type deal (because I'm reviewing for a change!).
Look. At. Him. Kiba Inuzuka and his "No, this happens every night, but..." I have no idea why I like that so much, but I really do. And nice description with scenery - all four of you! I almost felt a little jealous that I couldn't see it, too.
Oh... I feel like I'm reviewing wrong... I enjoyed this! Naruto running after Sakura definitely made me feel the blow of that brush off. Kiba trying to set the mood definitely made me feel longing. I wonder how Shino would take this news...
Nice fic, guys. Es bueno. :D
30Juri.DPThere is a...weird picture next to my review box.
Anyhoo, look at me, all late on the scene! This fic definitely feels like 'In another universe' type deal (because I'm reviewing for a change!).
Look. At. Him. Kiba Inuzuka and his "No, this happens every night, but..." I have no idea why I like that so much, but I really do. And nice description with scenery - all four of you! I almost felt a little jealous that I couldn't see it, too.
Oh... I feel like I'm reviewing wrong... I enjoyed this! Naruto running after Sakura definitely made me feel the blow of that brush off. Kiba trying to set the mood definitely made me feel longing. I wonder how Shino would take this news...
Nice fic, guys. Es bueno. :D
4/13/2014 c1 chained-love
Amazing job! The sentences flowed beautifully with the story and both confession felt so real, I could practical feel the awkwardness leaping of the screen while reading it. Oh and the metaphor of the sun and the stars was just brilliant! :)
Amazing job! The sentences flowed beautifully with the story and both confession felt so real, I could practical feel the awkwardness leaping of the screen while reading it. Oh and the metaphor of the sun and the stars was just brilliant! :)
4/4/2014 c1 48Clementive
... just send the script to Kishi-kun. KibaHina should be canon by next morning. *_*
11/10 on the fluff scale and so deliciously Kiba... ;) I shouted "awww" all way through. Good job! (Naruto truly doesn't deserve her. He still hasn't answered to her confession. I mean WHO does that?! .')
48Clementive... just send the script to Kishi-kun. KibaHina should be canon by next morning. *_*
11/10 on the fluff scale and so deliciously Kiba... ;) I shouted "awww" all way through. Good job! (Naruto truly doesn't deserve her. He still hasn't answered to her confession. I mean WHO does that?! .')
1/30/2014 c1 57Amulet Misty
Fluuuuuuffy romance. You've got everyone's character very spot on, I think. Hinata's nervousness and hesitation is just like her...and of course Naruto misunderstanding was very like him too. He does only have eyes for Sakura it seems (although we'll be seeing how that goes, with Naruto I'm never too sure on Kishimoto's direction on pairs xD).
Kiba is very sweet and endearing here. He's a lot more sensitive than Naruto, I'd find. Leave it to him for his romantic gesture to be very close to nature. Impulsively kissing Hinata was quite like him too. Haha x3
I especially liked the ending though - Hinata having a change in her way of carrying herself and behaving was a nice way to show that being Kiba's girlfriend is good with her, without dragging it on too much.
I was sent here by Crow, so as I understand he did a lot of the artsy vocabulary (it's just like him) so good job on that, as always :D And great job on the storyline (cheese is cheese but I love cheese so yay). I'm really impressed you guys did this in one night.
- Dina
P.S. Wait...YukiTenVianey...Ten...Yuki...hold the phone...does this group include Ten as in Tensei Kano. [-headspins if this is true-]
57Amulet MistyFluuuuuuffy romance. You've got everyone's character very spot on, I think. Hinata's nervousness and hesitation is just like her...and of course Naruto misunderstanding was very like him too. He does only have eyes for Sakura it seems (although we'll be seeing how that goes, with Naruto I'm never too sure on Kishimoto's direction on pairs xD).
Kiba is very sweet and endearing here. He's a lot more sensitive than Naruto, I'd find. Leave it to him for his romantic gesture to be very close to nature. Impulsively kissing Hinata was quite like him too. Haha x3
I especially liked the ending though - Hinata having a change in her way of carrying herself and behaving was a nice way to show that being Kiba's girlfriend is good with her, without dragging it on too much.
I was sent here by Crow, so as I understand he did a lot of the artsy vocabulary (it's just like him) so good job on that, as always :D And great job on the storyline (cheese is cheese but I love cheese so yay). I'm really impressed you guys did this in one night.
- Dina
P.S. Wait...YukiTenVianey...Ten...Yuki...hold the phone...does this group include Ten as in Tensei Kano. [-headspins if this is true-]
1/26/2014 c1 WolfPrinceKouga
This was a nice fluffy one-shot. I'd say Kiba is a bit overly philosophical for it to be believable for his character but what you had him say was nice all the same. Hinata's demeanor isn't entirely fitting to her current canon self but its still something that can be imagined, especially if this takes place at an earlier time. While showing off natural beauties is common as a romantic set-up, I always found them especially fitting for someone like Kiba, who is wild and goes out in the forest a lot, so it was a good choice.
This was a nice fluffy one-shot. I'd say Kiba is a bit overly philosophical for it to be believable for his character but what you had him say was nice all the same. Hinata's demeanor isn't entirely fitting to her current canon self but its still something that can be imagined, especially if this takes place at an earlier time. While showing off natural beauties is common as a romantic set-up, I always found them especially fitting for someone like Kiba, who is wild and goes out in the forest a lot, so it was a good choice.
1/21/2014 c1 49Fanwoman
This was lovely. The metaphor you used was perfect, and his confession was so openly honest, just like him. Thank you for this story!
49FanwomanThis was lovely. The metaphor you used was perfect, and his confession was so openly honest, just like him. Thank you for this story!
1/5/2014 c1 Kanzaki Aiko
It was amazing! I liked Kiba's explanation of darkness and stars, and the way he explains his love for Hinata. Great job!
It was amazing! I liked Kiba's explanation of darkness and stars, and the way he explains his love for Hinata. Great job!
1/3/2014 c1 3Shizuka Taiyou
This was an awesome Hinata/Kiba fic. Kiba is my second favorite person to be with Hinata. Besides Naruto being number one and a really good OC for her as third.
C.D.
3Shizuka TaiyouThis was an awesome Hinata/Kiba fic. Kiba is my second favorite person to be with Hinata. Besides Naruto being number one and a really good OC for her as third.
C.D.
1/3/2014 c1 RaNdOm PeRsOn
That was AMAZING! I loved all of it!
That was AMAZING! I loved all of it!