for Discoveries in School1/3/2014 c1 Paradoxical Thinking
Good story idea. I like it a lot seeing as it's different from most stories with a similar base idea. The chapters are a good length to read and the way you left a cliff handed make you want to read more. My only criticism are that the speak doesn't follow the normal rules and that there are a few small grammar errors in it. So I would give it a 7/10.
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Good story idea. I like it a lot seeing as it's different from most stories with a similar base idea. The chapters are a good length to read and the way you left a cliff handed make you want to read more. My only criticism are that the speak doesn't follow the normal rules and that there are a few small grammar errors in it. So I would give it a 7/10.
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