3/6/2014 c12 Ruth Gisela
gracias por el comentario en el capitulo anterior, a la verdad espero con ancias el siguiente capitulo no creas que te estoy presionando tomatero con calma, tambien te dijo que me encanto este capitulo yo sabia que se iban a reconsiliar pero tengo preocupacion ella tiene que regresar y todavia tengo que esperar para saberlo, bueno me despito un saludo desde MEXICO con cariño tu fan Ruth
gracias por el comentario en el capitulo anterior, a la verdad espero con ancias el siguiente capitulo no creas que te estoy presionando tomatero con calma, tambien te dijo que me encanto este capitulo yo sabia que se iban a reconsiliar pero tengo preocupacion ella tiene que regresar y todavia tengo que esperar para saberlo, bueno me despito un saludo desde MEXICO con cariño tu fan Ruth
3/3/2014 c12 4Flying-Freely
Look at the possibilities that could have happened to IcyEyes. There's the big question that I've had in mind. Where did she go? Excellent drama and excellent job.
Keep up the good work, Proud
Look at the possibilities that could have happened to IcyEyes. There's the big question that I've had in mind. Where did she go? Excellent drama and excellent job.
Keep up the good work, Proud
3/2/2014 c12 Naturian Author
Yay! Another chapter! Why did Icyeyes leave? Did she get kid-napped (dragon-napped?) or something? GAH I HATE CLIFF-HANGERS! Anyways, please update soon! :)
Yay! Another chapter! Why did Icyeyes leave? Did she get kid-napped (dragon-napped?) or something? GAH I HATE CLIFF-HANGERS! Anyways, please update soon! :)
3/2/2014 c12 Unknown
WHAT HAPPENED?!
WHAT HAPPENED?!
3/2/2014 c1 Alex
Sorry The lást reply that got sent with The guest name And idea for another story was mine I forgot to put my name in AND I HATE AUTO CORRECT
Sorry The lást reply that got sent with The guest name And idea for another story was mine I forgot to put my name in AND I HATE AUTO CORRECT
3/2/2014 c12 Alex
Why did you make 2 sad endings already? :'( And hey I got a maybe awesome idea for another story, how about a story were there are only 2 fire fury's, land fury's left and they had no option but to get mated by force And The female had to supress the fun loving fury she is for a formal And boring fury to sabe her species with an adoptive mother of another species to show her how to act And speak but 1 day She can't take the pressure of her whole species on her shoulders and looks for a place to be her fun loving self atleast once a day And 1 day She meets toothless but She tries yo avoid him as to not fall in love with him or end up doing something she'll regret only to fail And fall "head over tails" for him And...I'll leave the rest to you since you SOOOO AWESOME AND GOOD LUCK AND DON'T MAKE DIE OF IMAPTIENCE FOR NEXT CHAPTER AND I HATE AUTO CORRECT :(
Why did you make 2 sad endings already? :'( And hey I got a maybe awesome idea for another story, how about a story were there are only 2 fire fury's, land fury's left and they had no option but to get mated by force And The female had to supress the fun loving fury she is for a formal And boring fury to sabe her species with an adoptive mother of another species to show her how to act And speak but 1 day She can't take the pressure of her whole species on her shoulders and looks for a place to be her fun loving self atleast once a day And 1 day She meets toothless but She tries yo avoid him as to not fall in love with him or end up doing something she'll regret only to fail And fall "head over tails" for him And...I'll leave the rest to you since you SOOOO AWESOME AND GOOD LUCK AND DON'T MAKE DIE OF IMAPTIENCE FOR NEXT CHAPTER AND I HATE AUTO CORRECT :(
3/2/2014 c12 Alex
Why did you make 2 sad endings already? :'( And hey I got a maybe awesome idea for another story, how about a story were there are only 2 fire fury's, land fury's left and they had no option but to get mated by force And The female had to supress the fun loving fury she is for a formal And boring fury to sabe her species with an adoptive mother of another species to show her how to act And speak but 1 day She can't take the pressure of her whole species on her shoulders and looks for a place to be her fun loving self atleast once a day And 1 day She meets toothless but She tries yo avoid him as to not fall in love with him or end up doing something she'll regret only to fail And fall "head over tails" for him And...I'll leave the rest to you since you SOOOO AWESOME AND GOOD LUCK sorry didn't put my name in The lást reply AND I HATE AUTO CORRECT! :(
Why did you make 2 sad endings already? :'( And hey I got a maybe awesome idea for another story, how about a story were there are only 2 fire fury's, land fury's left and they had no option but to get mated by force And The female had to supress the fun loving fury she is for a formal And boring fury to sabe her species with an adoptive mother of another species to show her how to act And speak but 1 day She can't take the pressure of her whole species on her shoulders and looks for a place to be her fun loving self atleast once a day And 1 day She meets toothless but She tries yo avoid him as to not fall in love with him or end up doing something she'll regret only to fail And fall "head over tails" for him And...I'll leave the rest to you since you SOOOO AWESOME AND GOOD LUCK sorry didn't put my name in The lást reply AND I HATE AUTO CORRECT! :(
3/2/2014 c12 Guest
Why did you make 2 sad endings already? :'( And hey I got a maybe awesome idea for another story, how about a story were there are only 2 fire fury's, land fury's left and they had no option but to get mated by force And The female had to supress the fun loving fury she is for a formal And boring fury to sabe her species with an adoptive mother of another species to show her how to act And speak but 1 day She can't take the pressure of her whole species on her shoulders and looks for a place to be her fun loving self atleast once a day And 1 day She meets toothless but She tries yo avoid him as to not fall in love with him or end up doing something she'll regret only to fail And fall "head over tails" for him And...I'll leave the rest to you since you SOOOO AWESOME AND GOOD LUCK
Why did you make 2 sad endings already? :'( And hey I got a maybe awesome idea for another story, how about a story were there are only 2 fire fury's, land fury's left and they had no option but to get mated by force And The female had to supress the fun loving fury she is for a formal And boring fury to sabe her species with an adoptive mother of another species to show her how to act And speak but 1 day She can't take the pressure of her whole species on her shoulders and looks for a place to be her fun loving self atleast once a day And 1 day She meets toothless but She tries yo avoid him as to not fall in love with him or end up doing something she'll regret only to fail And fall "head over tails" for him And...I'll leave the rest to you since you SOOOO AWESOME AND GOOD LUCK
3/2/2014 c12 the dragon
Here 's an idea icyeyes could have been hurt by the dragons that were them hurt her and close to dying and toothless is torn and he swears to protect her as long as he lives then she wakes up and is happy xlto sees toothless.
Here 's an idea icyeyes could have been hurt by the dragons that were them hurt her and close to dying and toothless is torn and he swears to protect her as long as he lives then she wakes up and is happy xlto sees toothless.
3/1/2014 c12 SIGMA 0007
So this chapter starts with the two the two dragons and how they cope with the previous day's event. Both IcyEyes and Toothless have similar thoughts but unfortunately their awkwardness towards each other doesn't allow either to cross the gap. Both know that Toothless should apologise and understand that they need each other... but it takes Hiccup who ingeniously used the reflection too create a playful atmosphere (after failing miserably to get them to talk).
They way they showed affection was great (and cute... )Toothless again was reduced to a love sick puppy but that's part of the Night Fury's charm.
There was also the part where they tried to go stealthily too the Village (are they Night Furies or Terrible Terrors on Dragon nip...? )
After avoiding Astrid... that also lead to another awkward scene between her and Hiccup...
But it ends on a more melancholic and sad tone with IcyEyes disappearing and Toothless waiting for her. It was a great scene.
As for the season finale of the TV show... That's part of the plot of the second movie. Hiccup can't handle and doesn't like the pressure of becoming a chief.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Also thank you.
So this chapter starts with the two the two dragons and how they cope with the previous day's event. Both IcyEyes and Toothless have similar thoughts but unfortunately their awkwardness towards each other doesn't allow either to cross the gap. Both know that Toothless should apologise and understand that they need each other... but it takes Hiccup who ingeniously used the reflection too create a playful atmosphere (after failing miserably to get them to talk).
They way they showed affection was great (and cute... )Toothless again was reduced to a love sick puppy but that's part of the Night Fury's charm.
There was also the part where they tried to go stealthily too the Village (are they Night Furies or Terrible Terrors on Dragon nip...? )
After avoiding Astrid... that also lead to another awkward scene between her and Hiccup...
But it ends on a more melancholic and sad tone with IcyEyes disappearing and Toothless waiting for her. It was a great scene.
As for the season finale of the TV show... That's part of the plot of the second movie. Hiccup can't handle and doesn't like the pressure of becoming a chief.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Also thank you.
3/1/2014 c12 the dragon
the word is cue not queue but everything was still good i love your stories
the word is cue not queue but everything was still good i love your stories
3/1/2014 c12 Guest
i love that chapter and i also love the others
i love that chapter and i also love the others
3/1/2014 c12 ILOVEPIXELS
You might know me because I have two
Names 1ILOVEPIXELS 2pixel the star.
I will be useing the first one.
So great job on the story it one of my favorites:) so I have one thing to thank you for!
Your probably cofused why I said thank you...
So I thought no one could see me because
Everyone ingnores me kinda like hiccup.
Alright we'll sorry for being pushy last time
I wanted someone to you know see me and tell me that they could see me:( we'll your my first person to see me:):) right thanks you just made my day! We'll by good job on the story by PIXEL OUT:)
You might know me because I have two
Names 1ILOVEPIXELS 2pixel the star.
I will be useing the first one.
So great job on the story it one of my favorites:) so I have one thing to thank you for!
Your probably cofused why I said thank you...
So I thought no one could see me because
Everyone ingnores me kinda like hiccup.
Alright we'll sorry for being pushy last time
I wanted someone to you know see me and tell me that they could see me:( we'll your my first person to see me:):) right thanks you just made my day! We'll by good job on the story by PIXEL OUT:)
3/1/2014 c12 2Night Fury Ninja
This chapter was great, Good thing that their fight was sorted out :) keep up the awesome work :D
This chapter was great, Good thing that their fight was sorted out :) keep up the awesome work :D
3/1/2014 c12 1denis.d2505
This is by far one of the best and unique Hiccup/Toothless/OC stories and I must say that I really like it, plus your writing skills are really showing and mesmerising all your concurrent viewers and followers.
The intricate small talks between IcyEyes and Toothless to Hicupp wondering about what the 2 of them are talking about but making it obvious enough with their body language and sounds to show us what is happening.
From the small moments of love between the 2 of them to Hiccup just being Hiccup we all know and love while staying true to the original movie.
It gives us more of an insight to what toothless might have felt while he was alone but in this case sharing his pain and fears with IcyEyes.
I applaud and await the new chapters of this story. Great work of literature this story is.
I would love to see ART of both Toothless and IcyEyes one day.
P.S. - IcyEyes my most favourite character on this site (intelligent, Loving, Caring and yet hides her more troublesome nature with wisdom and gifts of experience)
This is by far one of the best and unique Hiccup/Toothless/OC stories and I must say that I really like it, plus your writing skills are really showing and mesmerising all your concurrent viewers and followers.
The intricate small talks between IcyEyes and Toothless to Hicupp wondering about what the 2 of them are talking about but making it obvious enough with their body language and sounds to show us what is happening.
From the small moments of love between the 2 of them to Hiccup just being Hiccup we all know and love while staying true to the original movie.
It gives us more of an insight to what toothless might have felt while he was alone but in this case sharing his pain and fears with IcyEyes.
I applaud and await the new chapters of this story. Great work of literature this story is.
I would love to see ART of both Toothless and IcyEyes one day.
P.S. - IcyEyes my most favourite character on this site (intelligent, Loving, Caring and yet hides her more troublesome nature with wisdom and gifts of experience)