2/1/2014 c8 SIGMA 0007
Ah you have just founded a new game for dragons all over the world. Toss the Hiccup or in this case Hiccup (without "the")
Another great chapter with fantastic interaction between the human and the two dragons. And some failed attempts at flight but hopefully they will get better.
Ah you have just founded a new game for dragons all over the world. Toss the Hiccup or in this case Hiccup (without "the")
Another great chapter with fantastic interaction between the human and the two dragons. And some failed attempts at flight but hopefully they will get better.
1/31/2014 c8 Brenne
Yay! This is so much fun! I can't wait to read more! Don't worry I'll be patient!
Yay! This is so much fun! I can't wait to read more! Don't worry I'll be patient!
1/30/2014 c7 5Generalfanatic
Sorry for reviewing late. You do not disappoint. I always look forward to your chapters and never disappointed. Words cannot express how great this chapter was!
Sorry for reviewing late. You do not disappoint. I always look forward to your chapters and never disappointed. Words cannot express how great this chapter was!
1/27/2014 c7 1Crazy-Shanagins
AWWWWWWWWWWW ICY AND TOOTHLES so ADORABLW! x3 i cant wait to see were there relationship follows out... and i wonder what will happen when they fight the red death and...and when Toothless saves hccup in the arena! OH MAN
AWWWWWWWWWWW ICY AND TOOTHLES so ADORABLW! x3 i cant wait to see were there relationship follows out... and i wonder what will happen when they fight the red death and...and when Toothless saves hccup in the arena! OH MAN
1/27/2014 c7 4Flying-Freely
Marvelous chapter as always. Your work is always great. I have been wanting to ask if you're the only one writing this, or does someone help you?
Otherwise, great work, Proud.
Marvelous chapter as always. Your work is always great. I have been wanting to ask if you're the only one writing this, or does someone help you?
Otherwise, great work, Proud.
1/27/2014 c7 Alanna
Nearly forgot! I had an idea where Icy was captured and Toothless had to find her before the red death kills her! And I was also thinking maybe you could introduce Stormfly (the deadly nadder) and she could help him! Again great story! Keep up the good work!
Nearly forgot! I had an idea where Icy was captured and Toothless had to find her before the red death kills her! And I was also thinking maybe you could introduce Stormfly (the deadly nadder) and she could help him! Again great story! Keep up the good work!
1/27/2014 c7 Alanna
Hi! Great chapter! Really cute and cool! I think you should be a real writer! Please continue this! And thanks for mentioning my name! YOUR AN AWSOME WRITER! You have talent, a brilliant mind and amazing words.
With greatest respect
You number 1 fan
Alanna
Hi! Great chapter! Really cute and cool! I think you should be a real writer! Please continue this! And thanks for mentioning my name! YOUR AN AWSOME WRITER! You have talent, a brilliant mind and amazing words.
With greatest respect
You number 1 fan
Alanna
1/27/2014 c7 Brenne
Toothless is gonna fly soon! YAY! Would the dragons kill Toothless and IcyEyes? Or would they drag them back to the Red Death if they were found?
Toothless is gonna fly soon! YAY! Would the dragons kill Toothless and IcyEyes? Or would they drag them back to the Red Death if they were found?
1/27/2014 c7 2Night Fury Ninja
This was a very good chapter...no, it was an AWESOME chapter :) keep up the great work :D
This was a very good chapter...no, it was an AWESOME chapter :) keep up the great work :D
1/27/2014 c7 Guest
Loved the capter as always. You did have a few me's instead of I's though.
Loved the capter as always. You did have a few me's instead of I's though.
1/27/2014 c7 2Revanhun
Hi there!
I decided to take a look at this story during my usual searches, and I find it really enjoyable!
The style is okay, and easy to follow. Maybe you could use a kind of formatting method to distinguish dragon speech from human speech for further conveniance, but it's just my opinion. It's not hard to keep track currently, just a minor suggestion.
The composition is decent, and I kinda like Icy's wisecracks. You make the dragons appear to be a lot more than feral winged reptiles with their general knowledge about everything, that's a BIG like from me.
The plot is interesting, and it's nice to see the bits of creativity when you alter the movie scenes a bit, so it can fit your plans. I like how you tie loose ends, like Toothy's affair with the Whispering Death.
Grammar is also decent, a few interesting choice of words here and there, but nothing special or mood-shattering.
Overall, this is a well-written story, and an interesting one despite being the 999th movie novelization. Creative and fun, keep up the good job! :)
Hi there!
I decided to take a look at this story during my usual searches, and I find it really enjoyable!
The style is okay, and easy to follow. Maybe you could use a kind of formatting method to distinguish dragon speech from human speech for further conveniance, but it's just my opinion. It's not hard to keep track currently, just a minor suggestion.
The composition is decent, and I kinda like Icy's wisecracks. You make the dragons appear to be a lot more than feral winged reptiles with their general knowledge about everything, that's a BIG like from me.
The plot is interesting, and it's nice to see the bits of creativity when you alter the movie scenes a bit, so it can fit your plans. I like how you tie loose ends, like Toothy's affair with the Whispering Death.
Grammar is also decent, a few interesting choice of words here and there, but nothing special or mood-shattering.
Overall, this is a well-written story, and an interesting one despite being the 999th movie novelization. Creative and fun, keep up the good job! :)
1/27/2014 c7 8Dawnbreaker Dragon
How in the world does hiccup know icy's name?
Ugh... I'm pretty much out of words right now. don't know why though. Just want you to know I still think it's the best story I've read and I'm waiting for an update :)
Don't worry, proper long reviews will be posted later
-Dawnbreaker
How in the world does hiccup know icy's name?
Ugh... I'm pretty much out of words right now. don't know why though. Just want you to know I still think it's the best story I've read and I'm waiting for an update :)
Don't worry, proper long reviews will be posted later
-Dawnbreaker
1/26/2014 c7 SIGMA 0007
Great chapter. It was good that Toothless was contemplating what this new ability to fly, but with the need of a human, would give and take. Hiccup was surely elated by this development but IcyEyes too. Maybe there's hope for all of them.
Looking forward to the next chapter
Great chapter. It was good that Toothless was contemplating what this new ability to fly, but with the need of a human, would give and take. Hiccup was surely elated by this development but IcyEyes too. Maybe there's hope for all of them.
Looking forward to the next chapter