4/21/2014 c19 Youwillneverknow
Wow...just wow. I'm blown away. I just...speechless. Bravo. Thanks for wiping the sound out of my mouth. Thanks. Just...what a story... Just... I can't...uh...but...peanuts. OMG Great Story! CANNOT WAIT FOR MAY 1st. Just...wow
Wow...just wow. I'm blown away. I just...speechless. Bravo. Thanks for wiping the sound out of my mouth. Thanks. Just...what a story... Just... I can't...uh...but...peanuts. OMG Great Story! CANNOT WAIT FOR MAY 1st. Just...wow
4/20/2014 c18 Guest
Loved this chapter, though you could've showed Astrid near IcyEyes so that they can grieve for their "dead" mates together. lol XD
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Loved this chapter, though you could've showed Astrid near IcyEyes so that they can grieve for their "dead" mates together. lol XD
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
4/19/2014 c18 Thatoneperson
It's cloudy and raining. YAY! :D
It's cloudy and raining. YAY! :D
4/19/2014 c18 ttt
U did really good with the battle. Thanks for the great chapter. Please update soon
U did really good with the battle. Thanks for the great chapter. Please update soon
4/17/2014 c18 Guest
Gosh...I can't believe the movie part of this story is already ending :( The action and the feels...Great Chapter! I've been with you since Impact...so
Gosh...I can't believe the movie part of this story is already ending :( The action and the feels...Great Chapter! I've been with you since Impact...so
4/16/2014 c18 1ObsessWitWeirdPairings
Whoosh! Boom! Very good descriptive words. Haha I'm not kidding! You never disappoint cuz and I'm reallly waiting for next chapter!
Whoosh! Boom! Very good descriptive words. Haha I'm not kidding! You never disappoint cuz and I'm reallly waiting for next chapter!
4/16/2014 c18 5Generalfanatic
You made me feel like I was there! It was fantastic how many emotions were going on and stirring for her. I think you should update because I have to see the end!
You made me feel like I was there! It was fantastic how many emotions were going on and stirring for her. I think you should update because I have to see the end!
4/15/2014 c18 4Flying-Freely
The 'actiony' part was very well writen. I'm not surprised though, you are a great writer. I liked the little trivia. Nice fact.
Keep up the good work, Proud.
The 'actiony' part was very well writen. I'm not surprised though, you are a great writer. I liked the little trivia. Nice fact.
Keep up the good work, Proud.
4/15/2014 c18 2Night Fury Ninja
OMG, I cant belive it's almost the end already! It feels like you started only a week ago! Anyway, this was a very good chapter :) can't wait to see what happens :)
OMG, I cant belive it's almost the end already! It feels like you started only a week ago! Anyway, this was a very good chapter :) can't wait to see what happens :)
4/14/2014 c18 Thatoneperson
Sorry I meant to say,"Love the !" In my last comment. Sorry if I'm confusing you! I got it! I could go so you won't get confused. Bye now! P.S. How do you get a picture by your name? I don't want my picture to be a guy against a dark grey background. This time I really mean it. Bye!
Sorry I meant to say,"Love the !" In my last comment. Sorry if I'm confusing you! I got it! I could go so you won't get confused. Bye now! P.S. How do you get a picture by your name? I don't want my picture to be a guy against a dark grey background. This time I really mean it. Bye!
4/14/2014 c18 Thatoneperson
Hey it's that one person from before. The one that said,"I love your !" I would like to add on to what I said before and say each chapter inspires me. Sometimes you astonish me. I think this is going to happen in the chapter but something better replaces my prediction. Again, LOVE your story, continue, don't give up and have faith. Believe in the support others give you, express yourself through your words, your story. LOVE what you do, let others LOVE what you do. Keep me LOVIN' this story! By the way I hope it doesn't aound like I'm expecting to much. P.S Sorry if I'm taking up your time and I hope the time I've used to write this helps you. Keep on it up! Rooting for you! Sorry for grammatical errors if there are.
Hey it's that one person from before. The one that said,"I love your !" I would like to add on to what I said before and say each chapter inspires me. Sometimes you astonish me. I think this is going to happen in the chapter but something better replaces my prediction. Again, LOVE your story, continue, don't give up and have faith. Believe in the support others give you, express yourself through your words, your story. LOVE what you do, let others LOVE what you do. Keep me LOVIN' this story! By the way I hope it doesn't aound like I'm expecting to much. P.S Sorry if I'm taking up your time and I hope the time I've used to write this helps you. Keep on it up! Rooting for you! Sorry for grammatical errors if there are.
4/14/2014 c18 Guest
Love the story! LOVE! I encourage you to continue and can't get enough of it. Must read! I hope you can upload chapters sooner. Sorry your internet isn't working. I hope it gets fixed. Anyway, Good Luck! P.S. I'm rooting for you! Congrats on this masterpice of words and I have faith that you'll add on to this wonderful piece of arteork formed by a stupendous artist. I hope you'll have faith in it and won't give up on it.
Love the story! LOVE! I encourage you to continue and can't get enough of it. Must read! I hope you can upload chapters sooner. Sorry your internet isn't working. I hope it gets fixed. Anyway, Good Luck! P.S. I'm rooting for you! Congrats on this masterpice of words and I have faith that you'll add on to this wonderful piece of arteork formed by a stupendous artist. I hope you'll have faith in it and won't give up on it.
4/14/2014 c18 unknown
yay!you updated wahoo!continue please!
yay!you updated wahoo!continue please!
4/14/2014 c18 SIGMA 0007
We found our favorite dragons aboard Stoic's ship. At first Toothless has no intention off helping the chief get himself killed, but he realizes the connection between IcyEyes and Toothless and threatens the great Night Fury that should he not comply, IcyEyes would pay for it. So he leads them on with the only comfort for the two Dragons, the knowledge that Hiccup is well...
They arrive at the Nest and the Vikings manage to agitate the King enough for him to come out to destroy them on his own. Of course they are rescued by the Dragon Riders. Hiccup and Astrid try to free IcyEyes and Toothless but Toothless and Hiccup end up submerged. By the time IcyEyes has finished arguing with the Nadder about what they should do Stoick has saved then. After a sincere apology the three fly off to engage the king(rescuing Astrid in the process. )
The King is mad but he cannot handle them. They disappear and using dive bombing techniques injure his wing and make him give chase. Unfortunately the artificial tail fin is burned off and despite successfully killing the Red Death... Toothless is found laying motionless with Hiccup nowhere to be found...
A great part of the chapter was the ending where you portrayed perfectly IcyEyes'emotions...
Well Done.
We found our favorite dragons aboard Stoic's ship. At first Toothless has no intention off helping the chief get himself killed, but he realizes the connection between IcyEyes and Toothless and threatens the great Night Fury that should he not comply, IcyEyes would pay for it. So he leads them on with the only comfort for the two Dragons, the knowledge that Hiccup is well...
They arrive at the Nest and the Vikings manage to agitate the King enough for him to come out to destroy them on his own. Of course they are rescued by the Dragon Riders. Hiccup and Astrid try to free IcyEyes and Toothless but Toothless and Hiccup end up submerged. By the time IcyEyes has finished arguing with the Nadder about what they should do Stoick has saved then. After a sincere apology the three fly off to engage the king(rescuing Astrid in the process. )
The King is mad but he cannot handle them. They disappear and using dive bombing techniques injure his wing and make him give chase. Unfortunately the artificial tail fin is burned off and despite successfully killing the Red Death... Toothless is found laying motionless with Hiccup nowhere to be found...
A great part of the chapter was the ending where you portrayed perfectly IcyEyes'emotions...
Well Done.
4/14/2014 c18 8Dawnbreaker Dragon
I think this was extremely good for an Action scene, especially when it's not really your thing (well, at least you said so). There's a few thing you could have added but overall really good. Just As great I'd expect from you :)
your writing is really inspirational. Because of this, I feel like writing myself. Oh, reminds me, would you like to hear my special story idea? As far as I know, I think I'll need your help on it anyways on one of the chapters. I'll send in the details of this special story in a PM if u wish.
You're awesome, keep it up!
-Dawnbreaker
I think this was extremely good for an Action scene, especially when it's not really your thing (well, at least you said so). There's a few thing you could have added but overall really good. Just As great I'd expect from you :)
your writing is really inspirational. Because of this, I feel like writing myself. Oh, reminds me, would you like to hear my special story idea? As far as I know, I think I'll need your help on it anyways on one of the chapters. I'll send in the details of this special story in a PM if u wish.
You're awesome, keep it up!
-Dawnbreaker