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4/13/2014 c14 10Breelin
I wasn't sure what to make of this at first. Mean Sam never really occurred to me... but you did a really great job with mean Sam. I never expected it to work that well, but why should I be surprised, it's you.
It was very well written, the length nevermind, it was perfect. You do so well with prompts, I think I'll need to come up with one for you!
For a song, I kind of thought that Mark's struggles went really well with the song I'm Alive by Story of the Year. It's a real coming of age song, kind of like what Mark goes through here and how John helps him.
4/10/2014 c16 EpicLoric24
Lol really hilarious and sweet!
Marina, drunk?! And Eight too? Why would the Garde drink? Was it Nine's pressuring and Six & John couldn't stop him?haha

Great story... Please update soon
4/8/2014 c8 30GEM1588
Again - this could be an entire story!
Sheesh. You're killing me!
4/8/2014 c6 GEM1588
nothing wrong with a small word count

This was clear, concise and offered insight.

Well Done.
4/8/2014 c4 GEM1588
That was one point in the books I still don't agree with - Henri, Sandor and Katerina riding the martyrdom bus together.

4/8/2014 c2 GEM1588
This makes me think of the Superbowl. When all the players say they're going to Disneyworld.

In it's defense - this really deserves to be an entire story ( .hint)

4/8/2014 c1 GEM1588
I hate sad.
But this was well-written and so I give you the utmost credit.
4/8/2014 c16
awww, this was sooo cute :D I can just imagine a drunk Marina, that would be so funny...great chapter and update soon!
4/8/2014 c16 2TomFieldings
I love it! I'll admit, when I saw the name of the chapter, I thought it would be a Nine one-shot. I sure didn't expect it to be from Marina's POV. :)
It was absolutely hilarious, especially the part where they tease Ella, and the ending had me laughing until it hurt, so great job.
Update soon!
Yours truly,
4/8/2014 c16 2124 Lines
Funny. Lol. Laughed a lot. So mean to Ella though... Update!
4/8/2014 c16 6thesecondgarde
Navrina! Omg thank you so much! This chapter was really cute, and poor Ella... the sight could have been potentially scarring. :P can't wait for more. Update soon.
3/31/2014 c15 EpicLoric24
Oh bitter-sweet, yes. But it's still romantic. I love Nix.

Haha did I turn you into a Nix shipper? XD

With the added Navrina part, this one-shot is really wonderful!
Please update soon :)
3/30/2014 c5 9lemon-moon
Ohhh I've read this series before! I still need to read the next book if it's out yet. The one after Diana has her kid.
3/30/2014 c1 lemon-moon
Oh, right in the FEELS! This is really so heart-RE-Breaking. The thought of him being gone forever 3:
3/28/2014 c15 2TomFieldings
Nice chapter! I couldn't imagine Marina and Eight fighting but you've managed to portray it really well! Great job! I loved the way you've shown Nine, he's not OOC at all, and Six is picture-perfect too. I love it! Update soon!
Yours truly,
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