for Different6/21/2014 c2 
2Bound by the chains of pain
really good story, but to be honest i think your selling yourself shorter than your worth.
in other words, i think the the story seems rather rushed. it's still a good a pretty good read though. keep up the good work
2Bound by the chains of painreally good story, but to be honest i think your selling yourself shorter than your worth.
in other words, i think the the story seems rather rushed. it's still a good a pretty good read though. keep up the good work
3/22/2014 c1 Guest
Love this. Amazing work. Really looking forward to the next part. Keep up good work
Love this. Amazing work. Really looking forward to the next part. Keep up good work
3/15/2014 c2 Guest
OK! I would sign i could and I will pass it on! but also, please continue this it is great.
OK! I would sign i could and I will pass it on! but also, please continue this it is great.
1/25/2014 c1 2furryfox74
There were quite a few spelling errors. one I noticed most is at one point you used the word 'forward' instead of 'furrowed'. otherwise very good and I can't wait for more!
2furryfox74There were quite a few spelling errors. one I noticed most is at one point you used the word 'forward' instead of 'furrowed'. otherwise very good and I can't wait for more!