
6/28/2015 c1 Guest
that not true your lying !
that not true your lying !
8/22/2014 c1
8furrballnerd
Seems to have a good start and I am looking forward to continue reading as you write. So few Heaven's Lost Property stories out there it's nice to see someone working on an interesting one. Kudos

Seems to have a good start and I am looking forward to continue reading as you write. So few Heaven's Lost Property stories out there it's nice to see someone working on an interesting one. Kudos
3/30/2014 c1 Guest
Ikaros...
Ikaros...
1/6/2014 c1 rsdk525
a Sora no Otoshimono time travel story...this is a brilliant idea and i hope that this will give everyone a happy ending.
i am willing to wait for the next chapter and found this to be a very good prologue
my only question lies in the world of Heaven's lost property...if Tomoki goes back in time, would this be an exception to the RULE (you wont understand what i mean unless you see some of season 2 and read the manga)
a Sora no Otoshimono time travel story...this is a brilliant idea and i hope that this will give everyone a happy ending.
i am willing to wait for the next chapter and found this to be a very good prologue
my only question lies in the world of Heaven's lost property...if Tomoki goes back in time, would this be an exception to the RULE (you wont understand what i mean unless you see some of season 2 and read the manga)