for The True Child Of Chaos (old)9/26/2024 c5 
1KINGShaheed
Why is a child thinking about a woman’s cup size and ass? He’s literally 8 years old. I don’t want to read about a kid popping a boner. Dude…
And to top it all off now he’s become a servant of the hunt. You can’t make this shit up.
1KINGShaheedWhy is a child thinking about a woman’s cup size and ass? He’s literally 8 years old. I don’t want to read about a kid popping a boner. Dude…
And to top it all off now he’s become a servant of the hunt. You can’t make this shit up.
9/20/2024 c1 1Phob0s
reviewing this now so that if old people come to it they know:
this is an OLD BOOK, and 99% of the problems (bad grammar, confusing plot, etc.) are FIXED in the newer one, just go onto NOTC's profile and its got the same name as thiswithout the part about it being old)
1Phob0sreviewing this now so that if old people come to it they know:
this is an OLD BOOK, and 99% of the problems (bad grammar, confusing plot, etc.) are FIXED in the newer one, just go onto NOTC's profile and its got the same name as thiswithout the part about it being old)
8/17/2024 c1 Guest
Really man... Nice stuff but so many grammatical mistakes I emotionally exhausted putting up with it.
Really man... Nice stuff but so many grammatical mistakes I emotionally exhausted putting up with it.
8/6/2024 c100 Anomynous
Yaay 100 chapters.
Well done NOCT. When i started this story i didn't think of that it would be this long, and usually, i would not read such a long story, but this story was very intresting and kept me hooked.
Thank you for all your hard work
From A
Yaay 100 chapters.
Well done NOCT. When i started this story i didn't think of that it would be this long, and usually, i would not read such a long story, but this story was very intresting and kept me hooked.
Thank you for all your hard work
From A
8/6/2024 c16 Guest
En todo caso sería un semi-primordial o un mitad semi-diós mitad semi-primordial la historia esta buena pero muchas tiene muchas incongruencias además de lo que hasta ahora lo que lei es a percy lastimado, percy llorando, percy sufriendo y percy traumado nunca una buena para el prota de la historia, mucho sufrimiento para el protagonista :v
En todo caso sería un semi-primordial o un mitad semi-diós mitad semi-primordial la historia esta buena pero muchas tiene muchas incongruencias además de lo que hasta ahora lo que lei es a percy lastimado, percy llorando, percy sufriendo y percy traumado nunca una buena para el prota de la historia, mucho sufrimiento para el protagonista :v
8/6/2024 c6 Guest
Es super frutrante quebñ lo traten como mayordomo cuando fue el que alimento a las cazadoras cuando no estaba atena no veo donde esta el gracias de artemisa blasfemo
Es super frutrante quebñ lo traten como mayordomo cuando fue el que alimento a las cazadoras cuando no estaba atena no veo donde esta el gracias de artemisa blasfemo
8/2/2024 c45 Anomynous
Hello NOTC,
Me again. I think the plot is still slightly confusing, could you make it clearer. Also, when percy tells rome that he is mentally 16 i think it is actually supposed to be biologically.
Anyway bye
From A
Hello NOTC,
Me again. I think the plot is still slightly confusing, could you make it clearer. Also, when percy tells rome that he is mentally 16 i think it is actually supposed to be biologically.
Anyway bye
From A
8/2/2024 c28 Anomynous
Hello nuts of the chest,
I am leaving another review. I like the lemons in this chapter. When does percy go to 16. Will he get to fourth base with his girlfriends. Also, are you from english, because i have never heard anyone say "clean as a whistle"
(I am taking english lessons so i can speak better)
From A
Hello nuts of the chest,
I am leaving another review. I like the lemons in this chapter. When does percy go to 16. Will he get to fourth base with his girlfriends. Also, are you from english, because i have never heard anyone say "clean as a whistle"
(I am taking english lessons so i can speak better)
From A
8/1/2024 c2 Anomynous
Hello nuts of the chest,
Nice story so far, my only comment is that there are too many pov changes. Please could you change them.
(Also i was from asia so my english is not good)
From A
Hello nuts of the chest,
Nice story so far, my only comment is that there are too many pov changes. Please could you change them.
(Also i was from asia so my english is not good)
From A
6/11/2024 c9 dg238514
Que mierda! se enfrenta a un puto titan y deja que una simple semidiosa le meta la cabeza en un retrete, no tienes ningun sentido
Que mierda! se enfrenta a un puto titan y deja que una simple semidiosa le meta la cabeza en un retrete, no tienes ningun sentido
3/13/2024 c4 Drako2006
Jesus man, I like the story but a little warning is needed for that kind of shit, that’s not gore or lemon that’s SA and rape.
Jesus man, I like the story but a little warning is needed for that kind of shit, that’s not gore or lemon that’s SA and rape.
1/20/2024 c4 Guest
I hope percy doesn't forgive posiden it's he's fault that dally got raped and died. Like how tf can he not just visit for like 2 minutes and make sure they were all right
I hope percy doesn't forgive posiden it's he's fault that dally got raped and died. Like how tf can he not just visit for like 2 minutes and make sure they were all right
1/20/2024 c4 Guest
Wtf did Sally have to get raped. I get that chaos can't interfere but the other primordials could have didn't order say if " if she doesn't kill him I will kill him myself like tf would you not kill him before raping Sally cus afterwards he would harm percy like wtf.
BTW I do like the story and i think a good story it's just this particular chapter pisses me off like if they want to kill Sally off for the plot just kill her not let her get raped by that disgusting pig
Wtf did Sally have to get raped. I get that chaos can't interfere but the other primordials could have didn't order say if " if she doesn't kill him I will kill him myself like tf would you not kill him before raping Sally cus afterwards he would harm percy like wtf.
BTW I do like the story and i think a good story it's just this particular chapter pisses me off like if they want to kill Sally off for the plot just kill her not let her get raped by that disgusting pig