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12/9/2014 c1 Random reader
So cool yet creepy
1/7/2014 c1 5Limerantic
This is so short, and yet, so sweet. This is a fantastic read for being just above 200 words. It adds a sense of "creepy" and "what if" without actually talking about what happened, until the very end. It's also, albeit in free verse, very poetic. A definite favorite.
1/6/2014 c1 8Sometsuki
Very interesting, I can totally see an insane Garry burning Ib to death. Even though it never happened in the game.
1/5/2014 c1 50Natsumiya Teirin
I can kinda see this becoming a multi-chapter thing. Maybe a three-shot with the next two shots being in Ib's and Mary's point of veiw. Just sayin, is all.
1/4/2014 c1 KawaiiJoy101
. . . whoa. . .
1/4/2014 c1 17Disciple of Ember
Wow, that was creepy. In a good way. I guess Garry finally snapped, but who can blame him for going insane after being in the doll room.

Very nice use of perspective to make this really unsettling without getting too deep into descriptions. To be honest, I almost want to see this as a bad end for the game now that you portrayed it so well.

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