for To Change the Past5/31/2015 c26 The bomb
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!I SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THE UPDATE! I NEVER GAVE UP ON THIS STORY! I CHECK EVERY SINGLE WEEK!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!I SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THE UPDATE! I NEVER GAVE UP ON THIS STORY! I CHECK EVERY SINGLE WEEK!
5/27/2015 c2 daemon452
Wtf just happened, we went from 1 year after that war, to like a week after it. Zero transition. Is this a flashback, cause after going apeshit on them, getting hokage may be hard, if it's not a flashback then this entire chapter makes ZERO sense.
Wtf just happened, we went from 1 year after that war, to like a week after it. Zero transition. Is this a flashback, cause after going apeshit on them, getting hokage may be hard, if it's not a flashback then this entire chapter makes ZERO sense.
5/24/2015 c26 Guest
I will check this every day ;D
I will check this every day ;D
5/24/2015 c26 Guest
Keep it up pleeeease, I love this story! It is one on my favourite time-travel Naruto story and you are so original with all your ideas! Konran is a very well developed character U_U and is handsome too U_U veeery well U_U
I don't believe you are losing your touch, this charapter was very good
Naruto gaiden is sbsbkakdh, I agree
I hope you update soon because now that you have restart I can't wait anymore *o*
Keep it up pleeeease, I love this story! It is one on my favourite time-travel Naruto story and you are so original with all your ideas! Konran is a very well developed character U_U and is handsome too U_U veeery well U_U
I don't believe you are losing your touch, this charapter was very good
Naruto gaiden is sbsbkakdh, I agree
I hope you update soon because now that you have restart I can't wait anymore *o*
5/24/2015 c9 Amuu
I noticed you mentioned that the Sandaime tells Gai and Kakashi another person attempts to make off with the forbidden scroll after the first attempt is failed by Naruto and Iruka. Then in this chapter, Iruka is still a hunter nin and Naruto is 9ish. Not sure what's going on lol
I noticed you mentioned that the Sandaime tells Gai and Kakashi another person attempts to make off with the forbidden scroll after the first attempt is failed by Naruto and Iruka. Then in this chapter, Iruka is still a hunter nin and Naruto is 9ish. Not sure what's going on lol
5/25/2015 c26 An Anonymoose
Kek.
Needs some grammar corrections, but all-in-all, it's good. Followed.
Kek.
Needs some grammar corrections, but all-in-all, it's good. Followed.
5/24/2015 c26 
5skg1991
You are losing your touch...but thats all the more reason for you to continue and regain that touch...Or else re-write the chapters which you feel aren't upto your mark. If you quit now, you'll never find your touch again.
5skg1991You are losing your touch...but thats all the more reason for you to continue and regain that touch...Or else re-write the chapters which you feel aren't upto your mark. If you quit now, you'll never find your touch again.
5/24/2015 c26 1buterflypuss
good chap, and i agree with him having very occasional bouts of naruto-like childishness but mostly keeping the personality hes had from the start
1buterflypussgood chap, and i agree with him having very occasional bouts of naruto-like childishness but mostly keeping the personality hes had from the start
5/24/2015 c26 4Sae Ayameko
I think you should continue or least divert slightly from what you were doing. It never hurts to change plots or ideas along the way.
4Sae AyamekoI think you should continue or least divert slightly from what you were doing. It never hurts to change plots or ideas along the way.