So were back here again... lets talk.

Look I've been thinking about rewriting this again.. why? Well I barely get feedback... so that's one thing, and when I do its nice.. but I really do need feedback, because when I don't, well I don't know if my story is doing good or not, and well that's basically a authors poison, besides writers block.

Other reasons are personal like paranoia... otherwise its relating to feedback... and I don't mean like oh good story man, that's fine but... some actual points about how to improve would be nice.

So what happens next with the next chapter, it will be authors note saying this will be rewritten or the actual yeah.. so otherwise I'm probably going to get in trouble with the sites rules for this uh authors note.